Ever hear Kaney West's Keep your love locked down surprisingly i hate rap but this story made me wanna hear it. I really was captivated by this story. I have no idea what to say to express the imense appreciation for a fantastic story...

Really nice written and really hot I loved it!

Love the idea and your characterization was good, too. I found quite a few errors (mostly grammar/wording) so I would say for next time to re-read your work once it's done and have someone beta it for you so that the fic runs smoothly. Good job ^_^

Very hot. Yay for the sexy bishies! I noticed several misspellings, but for somebody writing in a second language the story overall was well written.

aww riku was so cuute :3
great story, beautifully written, great job

There were just a few errors here and there, but it was pretty great overall. :D I really liked it. It was pretty original. I hadn't really read a fic like that before. hahah It's pretty awesome.

nicely done. pity it's a one shot

Interesting, i never actually concidered the RikuxLeon pairing before, but this is pretty good.