Oh God that first part of the story was so funny!! It was a very nicely written story. Good job!

Great story.

Oh My Gosh!
I loved your story. it was so cute and sweet.
AMAZING

AWSOME!

This was excellent! Great job with this :)

Best Line:
“No way, mate,” he shook his head. “No way are you telling it. You don’t do it nearly enough justice.

Such a perfect thing for Ron to say to Harry, very much in character for both of them. Because, chances are, Harry really wouldn't do the story justice.


~Bottled Sunshine

awh that was a really cute story bet everyone wants to be a pottert now

Oh - I love this!! This is very well written! Thank you!

i friggin' love this! my gosh, how nicely written.

Coolest dad ever! Yay! I loved this, how everyone had a chance to tell a part, and the boys saw how true courage is shown.

Haha, this was really cute

You did a great job in taking all of the HP books and turning them into a wonderful family discussion, kinda like a family reunion history lesson. It was nice to hear the story from the characters POV and to have Harry admit who he was at the end was the icing on the cake.

your story may have been the coolest, the most creative and certainly the best way of summarizing the HP series. Totally a winner!

Dear me, I think I may have a cried a little bit.
A lovely story :)
If you're interested, the only critiscism I have is poor Fred (I hate JK for killing him) - its not a fair criticism at all, I just want for him not to have died!
Brilliant, thank you :)

That was a really sweet story, I enjoyed reading it.

You were talking about fanfiction for your fanfiction and I was thinking about a super-short drabble in which James is, like, 16, 17, and he says to his Harry something like "now I understund why your sixth year wasn't so bad..." to show that he just fell in love as well. I had something better, but I forgot it while reading the rest...oh, well.