This is awesome! Please write more!

This story is awesome!! Please update, I'm dying to know more!

awesome chapter...
I just blanked out. i can't think of anything else to say. oh well, great chapter. keep on writing!

finally, an update. im wondering what is on that envelope, but im guessing i dont want 2 no. keep typing.
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No :( Why?!!??!?! I NEED THE UPDATE!! This story is so ** awesoome! Killer had tah go through pink shtuff XD and he called Fang a sperm face. Now that makes a cool person in my book, ha. Amazing story.

UPDATE SON!

Whoa, real intense. Killer is a hardcore ** huh? Ha, surprisingly I like it, he's kinda funny...at time. Awesome chappay!

It was Itex but i think they're in leauge with the school because they both seem to be making the mutant people for wierd sick reasons. I think there is some secrete part in the school that had Max constructed or put to use after construction to save the world, this peice including Jeb. It's kinda confusing in the book, i think it's like a double-agent thing. Good Chap, i'll missed it for ur hyadis (spell?)

“This ones feisty, just how I like them.” Sound like Ari much? Apparently that one line gets Fang in the **. Cause the boy can start to watch some dude about mangle Max to death and he'll stand back cause he knows she can handle it. But he hears that line and snap, it's like a light comes on and he goes on the defensive. Love the story keep it up!

I didn't think it was confusing at all, but it really didn't get anywhere within the plot, and it was short. Short but good. So I hope for more, but more as in, better more. MR

i think its funny

kind of disturbing, but a super good idea. Really really good.

nice chapter keep up the good work

OMG! KILLER HAS GOT TO BE A VAMPIRE! THAT WOULD BE SO FREAKING AWESOME!

I think that was 20 "REVIEW"'s lol.

Wow, GREAT STORY! AH! Its funny...even if Killer is a psycho, he's kinda funny in his craziness. He's a cool bad guy, I guess.
I LOVE IT!

Cant wait to see...well WHATEVER HAPPENS NEXT!! AH! UPDATE SOON!

You made Fang tell the parents WHAT? I liked it for the most part, but the escape was a bit confusing at first glance. Please post more! BLOOD AND GORE!!MR