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| Shadow 2004-04-19 ch 2, anon. | abusecool story, and funny omake, it would be really good if you make more... |
| Jho 2003-10-26 ch 2,  | abusePlease continue :) |
| Priest 2003-07-08 ch 2, | abusethis is a sweet story, keep up the good work, ja ne =(^_^)= |
| gundamhardcore 2003-06-08 ch 2, | abuseYou better write more on this story because I really love it! |
| RuRsHeR 2003-06-08 ch 1, | abusewow... been waitin for an update for a while, and i can honestly say that i wasn't disappointed. this is getting interesting. I like your presentation (how you chose to convey your story). The technique leaves nothing out. I do hope you continue. |
| Ishagu 2003-06-03 ch 2, | abuseInteresting... afre you planning to continue? |
| dennisud 2003-06-03 ch 2, | abuseNice bedroom scene with Asuka finding out more from Shinji than she would have normally. Now what will they do next?? dennisud |
| dennisud 2003-06-03 ch 1, | abuseNice and interesting idea. Now I think that they should meet up and spill to each other with a 3rd chapter What do you think, hm? dennisud |
| Nigoki 2003-06-03 ch 2, | abuseNice story...keep it up! |
| Literate Lord of Levity 2003-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty good. Since Shinji talks about his uncle, is it based off the manga? I like manga Shinji. |
| T.M.M.S 2002-03-21 ch 1, | abuseVery good I hope you continue this!!! |
| Sach 2001-09-01 ch 1, | abuseI like. It's really cool how you put it in Shinji's POV. I like that idea! |
| KaworuX 2001-08-31 ch 1, | abusewow! this is interesting please continue! |
| Shinagami 2001-08-29 ch 1, | abuseway cool man! I like the 1st person POV! and the end was cool also! keep it up! |