Reviews for Mans Triumph Over Nature

Reviews For: Mans Triumph Over Nature

Daetor 2008-03-21 ch 14,	abuseSo let me get this straight, this is the complete story? I like the story, it's great and all, but it's rather incomplete. You should see this through to the end of the series, be it in this story or in another one. Don't stop until you get the job done, if you can't finish the job, don't start in the first place. I'm a big fan of the whole S/A thing so that was a big factor in liking this fic. With the new sub-angels and such, you have a lot of potential for a long and unique story. All you have to do is get it done. I'm sure that I'm not the only one who would like to see this to the end.
ST Pika 2004-06-06 ch 14,	abuseThis is a good story, have read it from start to finish. I like the way it flows and the different angel incidents that you put in it.
supereva 01-02 2004-05-29 ch 14,	abuseThis one is a good chapter. U muat update soon
dennisud 2004-04-20 ch 14,	abuseFirst of all i will definitely pray for you to come through your tour in one piece as news from Afganistan isn't as bad as Iraq it can be! Now as for this story, well it was your first so i'll keep that in mind but there is a lack of several characters being used, Rei in particular and for future reference if you need help in "Writing Rei", just give me a hollar and I can help. As for the action and plot variences very good just the grammar and word usage on a few sections need to be tweeked and cleaned up. overall a good story though not having Rei and the other children as much as they could have been used did hurt the story a little. YM me sometime so we can discuss it some more! dennisud
Danny-171984 2004-04-17 ch 14,	abuseWow!...okay, this was all great. I don't know why you think your story is not good enough...but that is your personal opinion... I, in the contrary, like it a lot. Well, it appears that you didn't finish the whole story yet... Keep on wrting High Hopes Here Danny P.S. Thanks for the info you gave me.
Danny-171984 2004-04-15 ch 9,	abuseHey Chewie, I am a fan of yours, and I have been reading several of your stories, which are ** great. Here is the thing. I have being reading "Man's Triumph Over Nature" and some of the chapters doesn't show. LIke in the website "EA Eva Fics", part 10 doesn't appear. Everytime I click to see chapter/part 10, it says that it can't find the page. I have try to find this story in other websites, and I did. In the website "In Other Words - An Evangelion Fanfiction Archive", you have all the chapters...well, except for chapter 10. In this website, chapter 10 turns into chapter 8. I think that you put the wrong chapter. I don't want to skipt chapter 10, so please correct this ASAP, cuz I want to finish reading this cool story that you put up. It seems that in Fanfiction.net you have started putting this up. If I can't read Chapter 10 from the other website, then that means that I will have to wait for it until you update. Also, in those websites, i think you put your email wrong, cuz I send you an email, but i received a "Failure to deliver." Maybe it was my emails fault or you mispell your email address when writing it down...dunno. I'm just pointing it out, so you will be inform Well, keep on writing. High Hopes Here Danny
Phoenix 2004-02-23 ch 9, anon.	abuseAwesome story, with a nice little twist to it. Keep up the good work.
Komino Z.E.N 2003-10-31 ch 9,	abuseYou should put more thought into the ratings... it is not definatly PG, it should be at least PG-13 or R... just watch it, k
Priest 2003-08-17 ch 9,	abusethis is good are you going to continue it? Ja-ne =(^_^)=
Epyon Zero 2003-06-03 ch 9,	abuseI'm sure I read this a few years ago... Nice to see the classics comw where the newer writers can see. It would also be nice to see more of this too. ;P
The Sandman 2001-12-14 ch 9,	abuseVery nice! Everything seems to be quite smooth and well done. Could you give Rei a little more interaction though? Being a sister and all....
Meat 2001-12-14 ch 9,	abuseContinue
Quincy007 2001-08-29 ch 1,	abuseThe ending was funny. It could be interpreted different ways. Not bad, though I am to wonder what brought about the change in both of them. If its just coincidence I understand. Not bad.
Shinagami 2001-08-29 ch 1,	abusethat's it??? come on, you can at least put in another chapter....well, anyway.. cool!

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