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| vampire-chan 2008-08-30 ch 8,  | abuseWow! The story is so awesome! |
| Sandy 2008-03-23 ch 8, anon. | abusewot cant wait for the next one |
| moonshinemustardseed 2008-01-13 ch 8, | abusegreat chapter! I still thing it's too much like the movie though. maybe you could work in some original dialogue? I isn't fanfiction if you're copying the movie word for word. I still think you're doing an amazing job, i just wish it was a bit more original. |
| Midori Heiwa 2008-01-11 ch 8, | abusewow waht a exelent story |
| moonshinemustardseed 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusegreat start! It did seem a little too similar to the movie in my opinion, but its still the first chapter. Good job! |
| Jewl4Life 2008-01-05 ch 8, | abusePoor Kiba and Sakura...they lost their loved ones. At least Naruto and his *ahem* side-kick Sasuke will soon kick **, at least I hope. Nice touch with Naruto's outfit too. |
| CollaneR 2008-01-04 ch 6, | abuseI think the French should be, 'L'Etoile de La Coeur'. French is also a second language to me, but when 'le' or 'la' is followed by a word that starts with another vowel (ie. Etoile), then you use the apostrophe thing. (And when it's 'le/la' followed by a consonant word, you don't, ie. La Coeur) But otherwise you're good! I'm also loving the story so far, all the characters fit their roles really well! Definitely original, and on my faves! |
| UchihaUzumaki baby 2008-01-04 ch 8, | abuseAWESOME! I SO CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
| x-EliteAssassin-x 2008-01-04 ch 8, | abuseAww, such a sad chapter, but at least now we get to some ** kicking, you just gotta love the lobby scene, so many guns and bullets X3 And don't worry, I for one am not going to attack you over the character deaths. Just a question, but are you going to do the whole Matrix Trilogy or are you only doing this one? Please update soon! June x |
| x-EliteAssassin-x 2007-12-31 ch 7, | abusew00t! Awesome chappie! But I think Kiba and the Oracle (was that Tsunade?) killed my brain with their logic! Please update soon! June x |
| Jewl4Life 2007-12-30 ch 7, | abuseI have to say that this is an awesome story. I really like it, though I've seen a AMV on either Youtube or Myspace that has the same theme. If you haven't seen it you should, it's also called the Narutrix. |
| HoshitheHorse 2007-12-30 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! |
| UchihaUzumaki baby 2007-12-12 ch 6, | abuseoh, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| MoonKaiser 2007-12-04 ch 6, | abuseHehe, this is an awesome fic, in my opinion anyway, keep up the awesome work! |
| HoshitheHorse 2007-11-30 ch 6, | abuseOMG. Itachi's a traitor! As soon as I read the first suspicious thing right before Naruto came, I suspected he was evil or something, and I was right! Before I even read that I was remembering that Naruto is going to be like (real)Naruto with Kyuubi in him, people are goignto be after him. Then I thought about how The Akatsuki were the ones, but then I remembered that Itachi was good in this one, then as I read the chapter my mind changed again. I'm going to feel sorry for Sasuke when he finds out. I haven't seen the Matrix movies in a long time, so I don't remember everything that happened, but was there a traitor then too? I can't wait to read the next chapter! I hope it comes out soon! |