I can honestly say that this is my favorite RoyEd fic. I love that you put in so much detail and It's not just like "Roy and Ed had hot sex".

Marvellously done fic. Any chance of some more of this arc, or are you done with it?

that was cute! i loved it!!
this is my first time reading FMA, and that was really very good. im glad i picked this one.
^_^ thank you for the wonderful story

JB

Hahaha! There's the end to your hot romance. A cold from your lover. Very Sweet...or not.

I just finished this and I love the story. It has it's fluff, it's lemon and it's angst. A good use of the need for comfort, something that makes perfect sense considering Edward and Roy. You had good descriptions and the jumping of time to time and using different point of views worked well together.

I kinda wished the epilogue was longer, to show if Edward and Roy continued with what they have or if they left it as only that night. Though the epilogue was pretty funny.

All in all, good writing and I enjoyed this fic.

Very nice, I really liked this story. You put a lot of effort to describe the feelings and thoughts of Ed and Roy. I also love the epilogue! Hope to read more of you soon, love Soof.

awesome story
you write very well :)

Nice, but it would have been better if you continued the story after the 2nd chapter. :3

GREAT JOB I LOVED IT, SO MUCH DETAIL AND SO MUCH EFFORT YOU PUT INTO THIS REALLY SHOWS GREAT JOB! I LOVE IT

I loved all of it. Really I did. Thanks for posting this. XD

I'll read more in the morning. good job =)

Wow, this is my first Roy/Ed fic. I honestly got curious about the pairing when I saw a video on YouTube (lol, of all places) that had a few pictures of the two together. I enjoyed this fic a lot. Thank you for writing it. Also, I loved how you did two chapters from both Ed's and Roy's POV. It was very well written. And I didn't think the characters where all that OOC (minus the moaning each other's names ^.^) I can't wait to read more.

Very well written, point of view is excellent. I would rate you five stars. This is excellent.

This was FANTASTIC! Truly a masterpiece of yaoi fanfiction. In fact, it would be totally appropriate if you were addressed as the Lit-Yaoi Queen hence forth! Absolutely superb, nyan!

This is so good! i enjoyed reading it very much! the epilogue was great!!