Okay, I'll tell you one thing - you are one of the most astonishing writers I have ever read.
It's not the half baked 'Let's make 'em bang/fall in love' story. I think I'm learning it will never be, with you and your stories.
It isn't brash, it isn't brazen or dangerous or presumptious.
It's realistic, and dynamic and wonderfully emotional.
This story had background, and plausible changes. Both things were reiveting and brilliant in the lead up and end of it. They made it what it was: Harry being shirty, the sex talk.
But you actually make the characters: you give them something else, and I don't know what it is, but you just do. It's a kind of new light.
I can't even get going on my admiration for your style, because I'm going to keep going and God knows where that's going to lead.
I'd just like to end this with it's life, the way you write. It has sadness and lust, anger, pent up frustration, happiness, all that jazz. And as a write, I relate to the fact that creating an atomosphere where they flow is...
Well, magical.
TehOdd1 xoox

this is amazing. i wish i could write half as well as you can. Your words and imagery...gods..

wow i really loved this well done

usually i'm not a fan of sb/rl but this is really good
but i have to confess that the harry/severus bits are my favourites^^

Madame Minuit12

Wow. I'm kinda speechless...

I loved your Remus. The way he fought against his attraction because he didn't want to hurt Sirius. The way he knew that they were made for each other, but denied it nonetheless. The way he wanted to hate Harry, but couldn't really bring him to.
Although the story was mostly about Sirius and Remus, I have to admit that I prefered the quiet development of the relationship between Remus and Harry. I loved the way Harry grew up and slowly understood why Remus acted the way he did. Especially the fact that Remus could forgive him and forget about the hate that existed between them so very easily, when he noticed what really made Harry act the way he did.

Thanks so much, it was fabulous!
ai

Wow,, this is crazy.. I love it.

this was so good!

My favorite SB/RL. You make it so realistic and just like a real realationship between the two of them should be. And the Severus/Harry is wonderful to. Could you maybe do a fic focusing on them based on Labyrinth of Sin? That would be very enjoyable to read I'm sure.

Great oneshot.

This is lovely :)

Wow. Nice story =]] I really didn't see Harry and Snape x]] Lol.

I felt so sorry for Remus! =[[ It's not often that I find a story like this which I really like =]] Refering to the content and the lay out x]]

And Harry being really mean to Remus shocked me.. 8|

Thank you!!

-Muse

Wow this is so good! I love the contrast between angst and sarky humour etc. and then there's the animal side to them which I think is REALLY well done!! Definately the sweetest/saddest and generally the best SBRL fanfic I've read so far!

Omgosh! this was most definitely one of the best RLSB and HPSS fics I've come across XD So angsty in the beginning! I absolutely loved it 8D And with such a happy HAPPY ending, it just rocked. I'm gonna be greedy and ask you to continue this fic, even for only one other chapter. It'd be really interesting, I think, to see what's happened from Harry's pov XDD But I totally understand if you don't write more on this; it's still perfect the way it is. XD I LOVE SNARRY! And I LOVE REMUSXSIRIUS!! Thank you so so much for this amazingness!! Please continue creating angst and love!!

Actually, I'll even recommend you to some other fics I've read; You don't have anything listed on your favorites, so for all I kno, you've already read them.

The Bet by akatsuki-chan is a really good SiriusxRemus. I hate he characterization on Sev in it; but I've overlooked it to get to the RxS parts

Also, it's really popular, so you've probably already come across it, but the Marriage Stone by Josephine Darcy is absolutely amazing, with over 70 reviews last I checked.

Anyway, thanks again for such beautiful awesomeness!! Please write more!

I really, /really/ like the way you portrayed not only all of the characters, but especially how you portrayed the Snarry. It was really wonderfully done, and gave me tingles just from something so simple~ Keep up the great work!

Totally intense!

I too had a little trouble with James in the story, but once I adjusted, I liked it. Cool to see him in parental role.