Poor Tenten...poor-whats his name? Yutaka...hopefully he won't be an a** like his father...a hot, sexy, yummyful a**...AHH bad L-E-G-W-H,bad L-E-G-W-H, bad...must. stay. a. certain. degree. of. fandom. of. birdbutt...still, GREAT STORY!

Hi

As much as I like Sasuke,you make me want to kill him.Epesially Orochimaru with his sound nins.
Poor Tenten,she's finally with the love of her life and now he's
dead.At least he died as a hero,well to me anyway.What also sucks is,she has his baby 9 months later.

From:Scotty-Lover

PS:It's funny what you put in the epilogue.I like the one about Hinata and the wood fairy,but I like the one about Sasuke more.

omg! i'm so shockd! i knew u warned that ther wud b character death.. but not... (CRIES PITIFULLY) NEJI! at least Tenten's happy... i guess... she gets a son to remind her of neji... i guess that's kinda like Kurenai when Asuma dies... ah well... this story was really gud! it struck my heart FULL ON when you sed the words, 'cold, lifeless, empty, white orbs...' or smth along those lines... so yeah... WELL DONE! except i think this story shud b romance/tragedy or romance/angst or smth... anyways, till next time! :D

i'm sorry but to me the last chapter was a disaster! A compleate disaster. But oh well nothing i can do about it

No! Cliffy! Must. Update. SOON!

no!! Plz don't let neji die! T.T Plese!! And when is shikamaru and ino going to get togeather?

Hi

I cant believe Neji asked Tenten that
And here I thought everything was going good for them,then bam! there in a fight again

from:scotty-lover

yay fight fight! :D
loved the chapter! :D
(pity it't T rated though... *argh kakashi get the hell outa my head!!*)
moving on i likey! :D
update soon!
Ja!

Ok...Great story so far Update soon! Pleae! :3

Hi ^^

I like it so far
Even tho you didnt descirbe much of the battle,I could still picture it
You should of made the fight longer...Sasuke is not easily beaten

From:Scotty-Lover

Hi ^^

Why would somebody want to marry there own cousin?...That's incet,ew!
Omg!I cant believe Ino almost got rapped...Ino was lucky Shikamaru heard her.
I also cant believe Tenten would cry watching a chick flick?
It's obvise that Neji likes Tenten,but the question is "will they end up together?"

From:Scotty-Lover

aaw so cute love it! anyway updat soon!

it's long enough but i

luv it!
heehee
aww thats 2 kute!
update soon plez!

ooh so both neji and tenny are engaged...
the plot thickens... lol! :D
i loved it!:D
what does "Oyasumnasi" mean? (i'm japanses but don't study the language... aparently my parents don't want me learning because i am japanese.. weird!)
anyways update soon!
(i would write more but english homework calls so)
Ja!