The new chapter is awsome. Only 57 reviews for this great story!?
Keep them chapters coming>_<.

nice story keep it up good work

Great chapter, keep up the good work!

Great story, read the nine chapters that are out and ofcourse it ends with a cliffhanger:p

You are pretty much pushing the limits of different things happening in different areas. So much in fact, you are starting to make it hard to keep up with, trying to remember who is doing what, and for what reason. The main problem is that enough chapters had cliffhangers here and there, and information was deliberately left out, that I, as a reader almost want to give up, being that the story isn't organizing. The reader is forced to do ALL of that themselves. Hopefully, if you DO add chapters, you will start to connect and organize some things.

This was great

WTF WAS THE GENJUTSU!AARGHH!

hahaha no, please don't die Jiraiya (I know that you warned me about it but still no don't die.) Wow this was a very emotional chapter. :D don't feel bad about writing this chapter because it was really great. The emotion you put into this chapter was exquisite. Keep up the great work and hm maybe there still might be a chance? haha I'm uncharacteristically optimistic.

haha sometime you should take a gander at my fanfics (@_@ haha all of the naruto ones at least have Jiraiya in them, and maybe in all of them he's the main character haha @_@.

~SaitouuRyuuji~

die sakura die good job uncle t

nice but no kiss :(

Hey it's a pretty good fic !!

You did a good job but I think Temari is a lot of OOC ... ( But that's not too bad ;) )

So continue and update soon

Good chapter:)

Nice story, I wonder what the next chapter has in store.

hehe Naruto should go half Kyuubi on that guy's ** next chapter...

*thinks of that crazy wind attack he used in 4 tail form*

tat was so funny if eyeryone in my house wasnt sleeping i would probably make them read this like 10million times