"Turning from the dirt road onto smooth pavement, John glanced from Sam with his stony eyes to Dean who was sorting through the box with cassette tapes with a goofy smile on his face, and he couldn’t help but wonder if anything would ever be easy with his boys." The answer is a big, resounding NO, John! LOL! Nice, Troll! I loved the moment when Dean kicked the dead woodwose--I could so see him doing that--you wrote a great Dean-moment there! And I loved the Sam-hugging-John moment-really cute! Anyways, nice work with the chapter!

camlann :)

Awesome chapter! I love how you included John's view point in the action. Great job!!

lol, Sammy beat those guys up good. Any ways, the whole dad being nice and being a father thing was great. I love it.

Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more!

Yeah for tough little Sammy!!

YAY, Good to see that Sammy finally fought back and showed those bullies just what he was made of!

John did good in not coming down to ** Sam for skipping school and running of-his baby boy needed him then!

Loved this chapter! Sam falling asleep in Johns arms was so cute. Looking forward to see how it will end! Great story!

Woohoo, just loved this Story! It was so different to any of the others Ive read... great writing, thanks!
Pip

Dean's dialogue in this chapter was excellent--incredibly funny and totally in-character. Really enjoyed the bit about his "haystack" hair--LOL! And congrats to Sammy for sticking it to the jerks who were beating him up! Oh, and I thought John's choice of reading material, "Common Misconceptions about Bigfoot," was pretty funny! Great John-Sam bonding moment, too! Anyways, nice work, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

camlann :)

hope this covers one of the 3.33 reviews you crave. :)

Good story so far - I've enjoyed it. I really wonder where Sammy is, and John's sobering tone of involving the police is done nicely.

Here's a review that you can count as part of your requested ten:

Oh, poor Dean! He's so worried! And I love John as the worried father--it fits in with what we saw on the show in those few episodes that featured him with Dean and Sam. Too bad there weren't more of those father-son moments on the show. That explains why I'm such a sucker for them in fics. Anyways, looking forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter, so update again soon!

camlann :)

Hi! I've just read this story from the start to this latest chapter and couldn't stop! Its such a great family drama, so well written. Poor Sam! John can be such a jerk. Can't wait to see what happens when they find him!

I'm really curious now! Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more!

I hope nothing has happened to Sam!! That was great..update soon!!

awesome chapter i love ur character relationships!