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| TyranDF 2008-07-10 ch 43, | abusetwo-chapters today... I can see the thinks starting to move in the way they are... Ya know, this last dialougue... “So why don’t you just move in?” He's starting to approach they even more... this is fluffy *_* hey, i have another question --' "O I feel a sugar rush coming on” < what the hell? dont understand this situation very well >_ |
| crazylove06 2008-07-07 ch 43, | abuseaww, that was really cute and fluffy. I loved the grey hair thing, it was hilarious. |
| crazylove06 2008-07-06 ch 42, | abuseThat was a great chapter. I loved the banter in it, and the time jump will be cool, we can see how much they have progressed. |
| Jurojin 2008-07-05 ch 41, | abuse/squishes them I love them being all mushy. |
| TyranDF 2008-07-02 ch 41, | abuseOh my god, it's a wonderfull chapter... That part "You actually died in my arms crying” , broke my heart... Anyway, he have emotional parts, funny parts and fluffyest (what the hell, i think this word is a great non-sense, but whatever..) parts!! The last line, in the parking lot, very very flufy and funny... michelle's blushing its something that i never imaginate before... Tony too, he is more perfect that actually is *.* See ya, waiting for a update!! PS: What is Eyeliner? Thats pencils that people use in the base of they eyes? |
| crazylove06 2008-07-02 ch 41, | abuseThe first part was so intense, him describing what it was like to watch her dying. I loved the end, it was so sweet them with all the playful banter |
| TyranDF 2008-06-30 ch 40, | abuseNow i made an acc =) I fully understood the explain, thanks a lot =) er.. sorry if this post look like a flood, but as a new user, i cant send messages before 2 days... I have 2 questions: this "knock knock" it's a sound of hits in the door ? And... well, tony and michelle had they christmas, but its afterwards day 25th , right? sorry by the flood --' waiting for the update ^^ |
| Reikofanfan 2008-06-30 ch 40, | abuseuh...poor Tony! Michelle must have gotten a heartattack. I love Gina, she's sweet! Oh, thank you very much for taking one chap to explain pinky and monopoly! What amazed me was that we do the same pinky swear as little kids!! I guessed it was the last finger but I'm not sure about it so I asked for help. Sounds like Monopoly would take up a long time. Thanks for writting such a nice story! |
| TyranDF 2008-06-29 ch 40, anon. | abuseOH MY GOD!! This scared me!! Darmn it Jay -.- This chapter 'll make my week more softly, thanks =D Ah, I want to know what is "pinky" and "monopoly game" too... I'm not native english speaker too =/ waiting for update... |
| Caroline Greene 2008-06-29 ch 39, | abuseoh, and good work with the 2:39AM september 4th. i had to giggle a little. cute, cute, cute. =) and garren is a great name for a dog. |
| Caroline Greene 2008-06-29 ch 40, | abusewoohoo! another great chapter! i was thrown completely off guard by the whole jay thing!...i totally didn't see it coming! i'm glad tony was the bigger man and didn't get into it with him. . .he even saved his life! [a very tony-ish thing to do in my estimation!] i can't wait for the next update! =) -CG |
| crazylove06 2008-06-29 ch 40, | abuseWow, glad they were ok from all that, stupid Jay |
| Reikofanfan 2008-06-28 ch 39, | abusewow!A puppy! how sweet is Tony!! Sorry I'm not native English speaker, would you please kindly enough to explain to me, what *pinky* means? thanks! |
| TyranDF 2008-06-28 ch 39, anon. | abuseFluffly chapter *_* it's so beautifull...I like it so much *.* “Wow, did you Google that or something?” she asked. “Dogs born on September 4th” hauhauhaiuahiahiuahiau Michelle are so attentive with Tony and they first christmas... wonderfull chapter *.* Waiting for the next update ;D |
| crazylove06 2008-06-28 ch 39, | abuseAww, their first Christmas together was perfect, great job |