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| KSUnsungHero 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseOh I love this story. I especially love the line her mother tells her about having a husband who won't yell at her at all. Great job! Love your work. |
| Wander52 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great take on things...great job as usual |
| JackofSpade 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseFavorite Line: “So, uh…” He kept his eyes on her palm, but apprehension was written all over his face. “What do you think? You know…” Because this crazy GSR fangirl can't get enough of that line! |
| microgirl 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseYou should keep watching the episode because it means we get more great stuff to read. While the back story was sad, it was good to see Sara get the ending she deserved. I thought Laura's line about Sara having a husband that wouldn't yell at her in the first place was very touching. And the second part fir in with the episode so well. Great job! |
| contrarymotion 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseaw...I loved the ending. And the way you compared the past with the future. I'd encourage you to keep watching the ep :D I really do like the stories that are the result. Besides,what else can you do before 8X05? *g* |
| chiops 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseSo sad, so sweet (and by all means please go on watching this episode over again, if all those nice little stories come after that). Thanks a lot! |
| buffygirl52789 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseThere is no such thing as too many post-ep fics for this episode. "His expression reminded her of a little boy who woke up on Christmas morning and found that Santa had left him everything on his list." That is SO perfect, you really nailed that expression. And I love the very literal, immediate meaning of "let's do it." Awesome job yet again! |
| xyber116 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. |
| TDCSI 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseWonderful as always. |
| toothchick 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI love this story!! Oh, for it to be true... |
| xxCSILoverxx 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseaw!! loved it!! =) xoxo Love From xoxo, xxCSILoverxx |
| Maisy13 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, so cute and sweet, tender and sad. I couldn't help but thank when Sara's mother said she'd marry someone who wouldn't yell at her in the first place, Darn tootin! The ride may end soon, but the journey isn't over. I can't wait to see what happens in the future, and for Gil and Sara to be together, forever. :D:D:D |
| InThe27thKingdom 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abusePlease never say again that you need to stop rewatching the episodes so you stop writing fic! I look forward to these fics from you so much and I'm so glad you share them with all of us. This was beautiful. I love the idea that they just got married like that as secretive as they started dating. Your other ideas for them work too, but I think I like this one best. Of course, everyone in the lab's going to kick their asses now, but who cares cause Sara is safe! :-) |
| probysgirl 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseAww this is so cute and amazing and it made me cry with the sweetness! |
| Ricker23 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseLoved this! I felt so sorry for 6-year old Sara. But yay! Grownup Sara has her prince now! Thanks so much for making my afternoon more enjoyable. |