Invader Hog,

I have been reading your story diligently, but alas! This is my first review. Sorry for procrastinating! I'll be sure to make this review extra long.

I really only have one question/criticism. Are you going to put these in some sort of chronological order? Because sometimes I get a little confused because you make references to past chapters, but in the next installment someone's died. That is really the only thing I could find wrong with your story. Well, that and I prefer when people put strong words in italics, not all caps. But that's just me.

But back to the praise! I absolutely /love/ this story. Your writing style has a certain youthful eloquence, but still light and graceful. (Graceful is kind of an odd adjective for writing, but I hope you know what I mean.) The words just /flow/.

And you can capture the essence of these characters perfectly! No one is over exaggerated (Spelling?) or melodramatic, you got everyone brilliantly.

Your story is a delight to read, and I simply cannot wait for the next installment. I do hope you decide to continue on with this piece. Best of luck!

Yours Truly,
SubjectiveReality

Aww... this whole series is adorable! This was cute, and left me with the urge to huggle Fakir. Great job with this!

I enjoyed these! But wouldn't the melted snow in her clothes change the duck back?... (Why am I nitpicking? Really!)

you're chapters are really short

Groovy

... it keeps cutting off my comments. -sigh-
Let it be known that these are the SEX. I give up on writing a twenty page essay about how much I love this. And you.

I didn't think it was that emo. XD You provided some well written insights into the story. Sentences flowed nicely from one to the next. Nice job. ^^

NUH.

It cut off my comment. D:< !
These are awesome.
Drabble1: This was hilarious, I ended up giggling about like a fangirl. ahaha. :D . It's really cute. (: . I love your comedy.

YOU! YOU! ILY. :D !!

Ahahaha. These are adorable.

I.
LOVE.
YOU.
WITH.
AN. UNDYING.
PASSION.

JKLSDFLSDJKFDSFJKLSDFJKLSFDKL!1oneoneoneoneone!

ahhahaa!

I'LL WRITE. AN UPDATE SOON.

I liked these two prompt responses. :) Can't wait to see the next ones.