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| Dark Wolfess Yoru Okami 2008-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it. It's different and makes you go "hm..." Characters are not OC and dialogue is good. Only problem is the skipping POVs, though I like the idea and presenation of it here, it was just a bit confusing. For a second I thought it was referring to the boyfriend again...but that just might be my brain being dumb as normal. Anyway, Love it. Yoru |
| gwen 2007-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat one shot and well written VY fic. :) I almost felt bad for Boyfriend #5. XD |
| SkyblueSunshine 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI like the ending: how Vincent is still convinced that he sucks, but is willing to go along with Yuffie because he knows that she doesn't. Very nice. I love your Yuffie here, though I think Vincent was a bit wordy. :D:D Thanks for the Yuffentine! |
| Pen Against Sword 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseWhy, madam, you were gone for so long and suddenly you smack us in the face with a boatload of goodness! I really love the startling jumps between the different sections. It was like every time it switched, I had to make sure to reorient myself, and I really felt like it kept my attention on the story, thinking about the different actions of each character. Great stuff, goin' on the ol' favorites list. Thanks, Nagia! --PAS |
| indigochipmunk 2007-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful, I really love the way you write. |