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Reviews For: Much Ado About Nothing

Dark Wolfess Yoru Okami
2008-07-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it. It's different and makes you go "hm..." Characters are not OC and dialogue is good. Only problem is the skipping POVs, though I like the idea and presenation of it here, it was just a bit confusing. For a second I thought it was referring to the boyfriend again...but that just might be my brain being dumb as normal.

Anyway, Love it.

Yoru
gwen
2007-10-24
ch 1, anon.
abusegreat one shot and well written VY fic. :)
I almost felt bad for Boyfriend #5. XD
SkyblueSunshine
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseI like the ending: how Vincent is still convinced that he sucks, but is willing to go along with Yuffie because he knows that she doesn't. Very nice.

I love your Yuffie here, though I think Vincent was a bit wordy. :D:D

Thanks for the Yuffentine!
Pen Against Sword
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseWhy, madam, you were gone for so long and suddenly you smack us in the face with a boatload of goodness!

I really love the startling jumps between the different sections. It was like every time it switched, I had to make sure to reorient myself, and I really felt like it kept my attention on the story, thinking about the different actions of each character.

Great stuff, goin' on the ol' favorites list. Thanks, Nagia!

--PAS
indigochipmunk
2007-10-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseBeautiful, I really love the way you write.
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