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| The Little Corinthian 2007-11-21 ch 1,  | abuseAw. That was sweet :0P |
| squintsquad03 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Really interesting way to tell the story. Brillient ending. |
| xxakp 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abusegood use of personification. definitely my favorite story. ever. |
| artigiano 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED it! Great job! |
| cjpaige 2007-10-25 ch 1, anon. | abusei almost cried... great fic... just great love the ending |
| hayley 2007-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful, it made me feel a lot of different emotions as I read it, and I loved how you encorporated the furniture into it, it reminded me of Beauty and the Beast a liitle bit! Again, it was brilliant, well done. |
| JennCorinthos 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseOMG! This is an amazing piece... WOW! I mean just WOW! JENNIFER |
| PintSizeGenius 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseHey! Awesome, dude! Loved all the metaphors and everything! So much emotion in such a short story. Definitely one of the best one-shots i've read! Great job! Keep it up! PSG x |
| ReJo 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseMy heart was breaking as I read this and I could feel the self-induced agony Lindsay felt. Awesome writing! |
| TBD 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI love how you expressed their relationship through inanimate objects. All your metaphors and images worked so well. Great oneshot! Does this mean you might be coming back to fic writing? |
| sakura-txell 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. It was a wonderful piece of work. It was amazing how many feelings you put on 'paper' with this short story, but I adored it nontheless. I think it conveys all the misery of a separation and the hope of forgiveness. BTW this went to my favourites! Congratulations for this one, and I hop to read more from you! sakura_txell |
| Sunshine-M 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseIncredible story... Great job... Really great. |
| Yemam2422 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is, possibly, the most beautiful piece of writing I have ever read. I am totally blown away by this. I can't even single out what I liked because the whole thing was perfect. Your writing style was amazing - everything flowed perfectly together. Your use of personifcation (with the pillow, mug, brick, couch) was so original and wonderfully used. My heart was breaking as I read it - Lindsay's heartbreak was so real - and I am so glad you chose to have a happy ending. I wish I could write something more coherent but I just loved this beyond words. Amazing job. Thank you for writing it. |