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soulmatesDC
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abuseGah . . .absolutely speechless. I can totally see where you freaked Katie out.

And although this was something I would never imagine reading, I really liked it. The emotion and just, well everything.

And Dimi, poor poor Dimi. Does he know? He seemed to . . .

This should be longer, but as it is I'm going to be late for work.

Love you
DarkRoses + ABoyNamedBrothe...
2007-10-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was well-written. You should definitely continue this story. Powerful language. Powerful theme. Kudos!
weasleygranger4ever
2007-10-25
ch 1,
abuseWow. You really are obsessed with incest. Wow. That was disturbing and tragic and supremely angsty. I can't believe you killed Lizwin! Who cares about Casey though. I couldn't even read all of it because I was too disturbed, I kinda just skimed it until it pulled me in and then I went like 'OMG did that really happen?'
Catdogg
2007-10-25
ch 1,
abuseI admit it, I did cringe when I read this. However, even though I'm not a supporter of this ship, there's no denying the beauty with which you write. You posess true talent. And, apparently you're also part psychic (lol).

Oh, I'm fine. I'll PM you in a few.
Pinklillies
2007-10-25
ch 1, anon.
abuse"Tonight, I'm Casey."

that did me in, wonderful Dahl. SImply morbidly-darkly-fantasticly fantastic. Marti reverting back to her young age in memory of the death of her loved ones-ingenius.
LanaLangKent
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abusewhat do you mean total failure? This is...beautiful. Except I think the age difference is 8 years, not 10. But I might be wrong.
princetongirl
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abuseloved it update soon
Mrs.Williamthebloody
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abuseWow! That was amazingly well written. It was depressing and beautiful and perfect. I was a bit afraid of the Marti/Derek-ness but some how you made it work. Wow, i don't even know how else to say it. Wow. Loved it. :)
Jen Sohma
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abusewow! i didn't expect this...but i still love it!! i never in a million years (exagerating am i?) thought i would read a story like this...good job!
ForbiddenEmotion
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was so not what I expected, and I LIKE IT! Ha the selfishness of Marti towards Derek was so awesome. I was a little confused for a total of 2 seconds but then I felt so bad for Casey though, I always cry when someone dies in a fic. But wow, I love the ending. That was very very clever. I sure hope to see you continue this maybe kinda sorta in some way!

*cp*
SkyHighFan
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseGood story but what about Just Smile?
Sparrows Dragonfly
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseok so im confused but them im not. i get that there is a love between marti and derek, which i will tell you is risky and im not sure if it worked or not. i just cant see it cuz he seems like a big brother to her, not a lover but thats just me.

ok so now heres another problem. was derek in love with casey as well?? cuz it seemed by the end that he was eluding to the fact that he loved her and that marti was more of an obsession. once again it might just have been me.

and finally you did not do horribly with this fic. i think you just made a different love triangle than you thought. like you were going for dimi/marti/derek and instead you did a marti/derek/casey.

once again i could feel the pain in this story. it was beautifully written. you are once again a magnificent writer!! i really cant wait until you write a sister fic for Only You. I LOVE THAT STORY!!

keep up the great work!
Rawr4cookies
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseOh, ever so sad...

wow. They died, how a car accident? I am so confused GAH! it's frustrating but the one thing i -do-know is that Marti and Derek are getting it on, and that's always a good thing, right? at least for you, it is. I feel bad for that Dimi boy who i really just don't know who it is and Marti's character shows the selfishness of what she's always shown when she's little on the show now and i thought you did it beautifully, making her grow still with that characteristic, not to mention-she's always wanted Derek and she HAD him, in every way

awesome.

sucks its only a oneshot
jannikajade
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseAfter all, the amount of optimism/childlike wonder a person has is directly proportional to the amount of horrible stuff that happens to them.


Gee where have a i heard this before? I love you. I really do. This was so angsty and dark and dirty.. and ** up. Really- beautiful though. As always.

Amazing stuff sweetheart. Love you and this.


*hugs*
Moonlit-Jeannie
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseOh my goodness! So this definitely was not expecting, but it was so much better. I love it, you did a great job. And dark fics are always nice, haha. I know I've written my fair share of dark stuff.

Allie
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