WOW.I guess that about sums up the way I feel about this story. How come there aren't like a 100 reviews already!..It's pretty difficult to find stories like these nowadays in ffnet and I have to say that I am enthralled with it. It's very descriptive and balanced. I especially love that we get to actually see Rukia's inner world and also all the detail that goes into describing it in tone with what she is and feels. I'm really excited to see where this goes so thanks for sharing such an original and wonderfully written piece of work!

Awesome story!
Original plot, very well written, with the right amount of suspense and of riddles... I love how you portray Sode no Shirayuki and the inner worlds you've created for Rukia...
I see that you haven't updated in a while.
Hopefully, it's just some case of writer's block that will pass eventually and you will resume the story...
Great job!

Brilliant! The whole lake/pond thing reminds me of the river of styx(I think that's how you spell it) and then the fact that it's made from Rukia's blood!*dies* That was soo cool, yet really sad! I really love your story! And I really really REALLY wanna know what this truth that Rukia's hiding from Ichigo is! I have some guesses, but still! I need to know! Anyway love your story, it's soo descriptive <3 update soon please!

very nice fiction, completely unique. Awesome description, you really put the feeling into the story, bring out the atmosphere really well.

you do realize you gotta update soon, especially after leaving us with that cliffhanger, right?

keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter.

great story

WOW! this is so good!The way you wright is really captivating!I love the way you portrayed Shirayuki! Please update soon I want to know what happens!

8D This is probably going to be one of my favorite stories EVER! I've had this idea of Ichigo getting into Rukia's mind when she's in trouble and him seeing her past and all her other secrets, and I've read some fanfics with the same kind of idea, but all of them didn't come through for me. This, on the other hand is awesome! You're ideas are soo perfect! I love how Sode no Shirayuki calls Ichigo "Kurosaki-sama" and how strawberries appeared in her inner world because of Ichigo

hope you update soon, this is god!
i want to know where Rukia is. T_T

I love this! Especially because i can actually imagine this happening. And i wouldn't be surprised if Rukia's inner world was really like this. The only difference between what you described her inner world and shirayuki to be and what i think it could be is that Shirayuki is tall and elegant in my mind.

Anyway, please udpdate soon. I love your ideas, and your writing style. I think you could be a professional.

Oh, and i think Ichigo uses fuck a little less, but that's my personal opinion, so whatever. And i think he might have called either shirayuki or yoruichi a bitch in your story, but i can only imagine him calling a real female enemy that, but again, just my opinion. And thank you for keeping the characters IN character.

P.S. Normally, i would be impatient when updates take long, but frankly, i think you're writing is most definitely worth the wait. Especially since i rarely give reviews.(if i did it more often they would just be like "it's good," but i don't like reviews like that, even if the author doesn't mind)

am eager for next updates...very interesting story! please update soon.

o...interesting story! I can't wait till you update this! ;D

yes an update. ^_^
inner darkness, i dont think theres one person who doesnt have that. hell, i know i do. good chapter update soon!

I love your way of writing. It's just SO pretty and descriptive. I can't wait to see what happens with Ichigo and Sode no Shirayuki ;D

Chapters are teasingly short, my friend. Keep going with this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Update Son!