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| VanishingSoul 2008-08-08 ch 4,  | abuseI love this! Especially because i can actually imagine this happening. And i wouldn't be surprised if Rukia's inner world was really like this. The only difference between what you described her inner world and shirayuki to be and what i think it could be is that Shirayuki is tall and elegant in my mind. Anyway, please udpdate soon. I love your ideas, and your writing style. I think you could be a professional. Oh, and i think Ichigo uses fuck a little less, but that's my personal opinion, so whatever. And i think he might have called either shirayuki or yoruichi a bitch in your story, but i can only imagine him calling a real female enemy that, but again, just my opinion. And thank you for keeping the characters IN character. P.S. Normally, i would be impatient when updates take long, but frankly, i think you're writing is most definitely worth the wait. Especially since i rarely give reviews.(if i did it more often they would just be like "it's good," but i don't like reviews like that, even if the author doesn't mind) |
| vkikay 2008-07-04 ch 4, | abuseam eager for next updates...very interesting story! please update soon. |
| ana-leez 2008-06-17 ch 4, | abuseo...interesting story! I can't wait till you update this! ;D |
| kyli the wolf hanyou 2008-06-16 ch 4, | abuseyes an update. ^_^ inner darkness, i dont think theres one person who doesnt have that. hell, i know i do. good chapter update soon! |
| Woodrokiro 2008-06-06 ch 3, | abuseI love your way of writing. It's just SO pretty and descriptive. I can't wait to see what happens with Ichigo and Sode no Shirayuki ;D |
| Dakyu 2008-04-17 ch 3, | abuseChapters are teasingly short, my friend. Keep going with this story! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| kyli the wolf hanyou 2008-04-17 ch 3, | abuseUpdate Son! |
| Oliviax3 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseOH, intense, intense!! yes, the beginning was gripping and it followed up really well. I'm interested to see where this goes and how ichigo will ever heal her again. Update soon! XD |
| Czajka 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI can't wait for the next chapter. Amazing story! :) |
| Mara-Lynn 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseThis story has gotten my interest. Plz update! |
| Conterra-san 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuserukia has been dying in that goddamn corridor for hwat, thre months now? sheesh. . . nice beginning. . .i hope that you know. . .everything will somehow be explained. . . ~C |
| kyli the wolf hanyou 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseNo! What happened to Rukia!? Update soon!! |