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Reviews For: Shards of Spirit

VanishingSoul
2008-08-08
ch 4,
abuseI love this! Especially because i can actually imagine this happening. And i wouldn't be surprised if Rukia's inner world was really like this. The only difference between what you described her inner world and shirayuki to be and what i think it could be is that Shirayuki is tall and elegant in my mind.

Anyway, please udpdate soon. I love your ideas, and your writing style. I think you could be a professional.

Oh, and i think Ichigo uses fuck a little less, but that's my personal opinion, so whatever. And i think he might have called either shirayuki or yoruichi a bitch in your story, but i can only imagine him calling a real female enemy that, but again, just my opinion. And thank you for keeping the characters IN character.

P.S. Normally, i would be impatient when updates take long, but frankly, i think you're writing is most definitely worth the wait. Especially since i rarely give reviews.(if i did it more often they would just be like "it's good," but i don't like reviews like that, even if the author doesn't mind)
vkikay
2008-07-04
ch 4,
abuseam eager for next updates...very interesting story! please update soon.
ana-leez
2008-06-17
ch 4,
abuseo...interesting story! I can't wait till you update this! ;D
kyli the wolf hanyou
2008-06-16
ch 4,
abuseyes an update. ^_^
inner darkness, i dont think theres one person who doesnt have that. hell, i know i do. good chapter update soon!
Woodrokiro
2008-06-06
ch 3,
abuseI love your way of writing. It's just SO pretty and descriptive. I can't wait to see what happens with Ichigo and Sode no Shirayuki ;D
Dakyu
2008-04-17
ch 3,
abuseChapters are teasingly short, my friend. Keep going with this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
kyli the wolf hanyou
2008-04-17
ch 3,
abuseUpdate Son!
Oliviax3
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseOH, intense, intense!! yes, the beginning was gripping and it followed up really well. I'm interested to see where this goes and how ichigo will ever heal her again.

Update soon! XD
Czajka
2007-11-12
ch 1,
abuseI can't wait for the next chapter. Amazing story! :)
Mara-Lynn
2007-10-27
ch 1,
abuseThis story has gotten my interest. Plz update!
Conterra-san
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abuserukia has been dying in that goddamn corridor for hwat, thre months now? sheesh. . .

nice beginning. . .i hope that you know. . .everything will somehow be explained. . .

~C
kyli the wolf hanyou
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abuseNo! What happened to Rukia!? Update soon!!
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