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Reviews for: Spinning: The Consequences of Making a Mistake
Aerine Lillet
2007-10-26 . chapter 1
I liked this. This was creative for a little aftermath fic, although I got confused at some parts. Try beta-reading (or get yourself one), there were some strange grammatical mistakes that got me confused (Seichirou instead of Seishirou, Hotuko, and what happened to Kamui I'm not sure?)
Kerialla
2007-10-25 . chapter 1
The only real bad part about this story is that it moves really fast. It states a lot of facts without much explanation. That is, it could have more *story*.

...but I really wish we could have a real end to X. I hate the fact that it stands incomplete. Especially since there's no way to know when or even *if* it's going to be completed by Clamp.

*sigh*
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