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JBOller
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
I always loved this story! :)
knp10
2008-11-30 . chapter 1
OMG!! I just fell off my chair in hystarics!! I loved the mood-swing, very pregnant Casey, AMAZING JOB!
James n Lily r in LOVE
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
i loved it!
very funny too!
i.am.a.fantasy.freak
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
cute! its so sweet :)
BobWhite
2008-04-25 . chapter 1
Thanks for sharing this story. it's great!
Becks Rylynn
2008-03-03 . chapter 1
I love bitchy pregnant Casey. And there's no words to describe how much I loved the beginning and teacher Derek.

Kisses

PS: I'm LikePoison72 on Dasey Nation
chinkybaby
2007-11-21 . chapter 1
love it!
ladys3194
2007-10-26 . chapter 1
i LOVED IT! IT WAS SO CUTE! AND VERY FUNNY! Hope you write more stories soon!
princetongirl
2007-10-24 . chapter 1
loved it update soon
PrinzessLynzee
2007-10-24 . chapter 1
I cant believe that Derek is a teacher. Even if he is only a substitute PE teacher. Its still funny. And i can totally see casey as being a mean and hormonaly driven pregnant woman.

its awsome.
bsloths
2007-10-24 . chapter 1
that was so funny! Very entertaining...especially Derek trying to teach sex ed. And embarrassing the heck out of Marti. And pregnant Casey is awesome.
Just Lilo
2007-10-24 . chapter 1
Ok, I really liked most of this, so don't think of this as a flame. It isn't.
BUT it bothered me that Derek was giving a parent/teacher conference because if he is a substitute, he wouldn't be doing that. Also, he wouldn't be teaching a class, certainly not on sex. And Marti can't just assign a project. I think you should have just made him a teacher, because it just didn't feel genuine to me.
HOWEVER, that isn't to say I didn't love it. Especially the Casey parts, although damn she is a mean pregnant girl! I also don't think she'd say he made her keep the baby, if they're married I can't imagine she would want an abortion. I can't imagine she'd want one either way, actually, married or not. I really did like it though, I'm just trying to give you some honest constructive criticism.
Coltan Heart
2007-10-24 . chapter 1
That was good. :) I really loved the prompt and I think you did a pretty good job with it. Oh, and I loved that one teacher calling them out on PDA!
Zuzzeroo
2007-10-23 . chapter 1
kk, this made me laugh so hard, which is not a good thing when it's minnight and i'm suppose to be in bed so i can be ready for my science test tomorrow. lol. i luv it though!!

Luv
Tara
TheBucketWoman
2007-10-23 . chapter 1
Of course I liked it! I enjoyed Scary! Pregnant! Casey. I liked George: “Trust me Derek, we always eat the chicken.”

And this line : "He managed to shame his dad and embarrass Marti while being totally professional about it."

He he.

Meanwhile I'm trying to imagine what Senora Sanchez muttered under her breath. I'm thinking it's the kind of Spanish one doesn't use in mixed company...the only Spanish I know...

All in all it isn't what I had in mind, but it came out great!

I had been thinking about Derek stuck in a class full of students just like him, and the teachers having a good "welcome to my world" kind of laugh. (although there was that whole Darren/Lacey phone in mayo thing, and in a way that's like my whole history repeating idea lol) You turned the tables on that, having Derek mess with Marti. I have a feeling she'll get him back somehow...mwahaha.

But yes, this was a whole lotta fluffy fun. And I'm reminded to catch up on Elements of Truth, cuz I've fallen behind, sadly.
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