totally love it! you should write more and add lackson :p

Yeah...you're hired. I would have much prefered this ending to the last episode than the hug. Great job!

i like it its great

love it! write more!

That was really cute... I think you should leave it and then make a sequel to it.

put more chapters please!

you sholud write more! please!

i think you should continue it i like it a lot

sorry babe but i think u can do better. imean this sint bad but ive read ur other works and i do believe this pales in comparrison

Cute story idea!

Once I wanted to write a story similar to this, but I never actually got around to it...

I am quite glad that someone as talented and skilled as you DID get around to writing this story because it rocks! Please make it more than a oneshot! I LOVE JILEY AND I LOVE LACKSON!

I think that Miley and Jake should start dating again, but then Miley remembers why she dumped him: because he is an egomaniac! And then she finds out that he still is, just to a lesser degree.

Oh, and I have a question... Wasn't she in her bedroom at midnight? Why did Jake just happen to be there?

Oh well, I probably won't remember that by tomorrow anyway.

Just please make this a whole story, not just a oneshot because it really has some great potential...

Your story rocks and so do you,

Roxi

aww. it was so cute. lol... unlike your usual dramatic style. xD

I'd leave it, unless you have a super dooper lackson idea. lol