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kaibasgirlx
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
ROFL!! Oh, this was brilliant! The ending really nailed it! Hahahahaha!

~Téa
pachysam
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Good story so far.
Please make a story in which Shoji and On Ji discover that Aang is the Avatar. It would be good if they remain his friends and decide to help him to end the war. It would also be cool if On Ji had skills at firebending, and if good Zuko got his own dragon-friend. It would be good.
FireChildSlytherin5
2008-02-10 . chapter 1
lol! I get it. Great one-shot.
InkHeart17
2008-01-25 . chapter 1
I love that you've done the aftermath of Aang's influence in that episode! And tricked out ending. Great job!

I'd really like to see more of this gang; playing Hide and Explode with Aang earlier in this episode or something.
Natalis
2007-11-24 . chapter 1
Oh dear... drugs?

I agree being an Airbender is enough of the highs. ;) Funny, though.
Junsui Chikyuu
2007-10-29 . chapter 1
what. lmao. Totally didn't see that one coming.
razzledazzle41191
2007-10-24 . chapter 1
lol, pretty funny
pachysam
2007-10-23 . chapter 1
Good story so far.
I hope that you continue the story. It would be good if Shoji somehow discovered that Aang was the Avatar. I wonder how she'd react. Maybe you can even make her Aang's group's spy for information on what the Fire-Lord and his officers are up to. That would be good.
Castoro Chiaro
2007-10-23 . chapter 1
That was great xD

Aang really IS flameo. He is indeed...

I'd love to see more people write about the FN Gang. They were really entertaining. This was a prime example of just how fun they can be (Shoji and On Ji would be adorable. I loved that kid in the episode...what with the two lines he had :D)
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