ROFL! gr8 story!

I laughed out loud at this one. Very well done and you did stay true to the characters. Thanks!

*Applauds* Oh very nice indeed.

Personally, I'd have had Jack walk off shaking his head and muttering "Kids..." But that's just me.

As ever keep up the good work.

*giggling* okay i needed that. i can so see that happening. especially the whole emailing back and forth cuz why should they yell across the room at each other when the computer is RIGHT THERE.

is this it or do you plan to continue?

and jack so knows exactly what is going on.

ops gotta go. i hear the kids in the halls.

Not bad for your first Torchwood attempt, you have got Owen down pat

Karma really is **.

Go Gwen and Tosh!!