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| Moonlight PI 2007-10-28 ch 1,  | abuseAw this was so cute! And nicely done by the way, Moonlights lucky to have a writer like you in the lot, because we need every one we can gather for this new series! I like how your write Mick, he doesnt have the smoothes lines (cuz if you watch the show you see he doesnt, he hesiated quite a bit over the questions Beth throws at him, not usued to talking to girls in a while maybe? lol hard to imagine!) anyhow I liked how hes comes of a little mysterious but very real, and very much there. "He decides to end the hug before she does something that she’ll regret or before he loses control of his animal instincts." Thats right there is totally Mick all the way. Ending the contact before she does something that she'll regret and cam potentally ruin there budding friendship, while recognizing that his animal instincs are stronger with her around, cuz lets face it for all that he buries it, he's crazy about that reporter gal. "When Beth calls, I always pick up" he said it himself in one of the eps "Fever?". Anyhow, I enjoyed reading this and hope to see more some time! |
| PadawanCassy 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseHello again, That was a really story, keep up with the wonderful work. Cassy |