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Reviews for: Sarah's Summer Holiday
Mistress Scribbles
2007-10-26 . chapter 1
Love!

Origins of the Siege jumper, Spikes and Inappropriate Funeral Cap!

Really liked what you did with Sarah's parents. They were wonderful. And the opening scene between Sarah and Lynda was perfect.

Unfortunately, Sarah's usual taste in blokes paints a rather Fugly portrait of Matt in my mind. Ho Hum.
Ultrawoman
2007-10-24 . chapter 1
And to think I really never liked Sarah all that much, for no particular reason, I don't think, but thats not the point! The point is I really enjoyed this story. You write these characters so well, and your stories always make me smile :) Excellent!
~Ultra~
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