haha, ver ver cute, I wasn't expecting the ending at all. But...if the rating is K, then why does Ed swear? Meh, oh well.

EPPICC WINN! Got me laughing for 2 minutes strait! XD You think of something else but its just about stew!! HAHAhaa still laughing! Most. Funny. Short. One-shot. I. Have. Ever. Read. FAVES!!~

~B.D

haha.
funny:)
gotta love edWin!

Yeah, it was kinda predictable that they weren't talking about what I thought they were talking about xD But I'd never expect stew, lulz.

Pasta wins 8U

even though I could tell you were setting us up for something like that, I still laughed. Nice :)

lol...

Too good... too funny!

kisses,

hikaru!

Holy cow! I cannot stop laughing!! XD
Oi! How I love the EdWinry X3
Not only are you an amazing artist but your writing is GREAT as well! :D
Hooray. :]

And I thought this was going to be a serious, life-changing moment, but I forgot this was humor. That ending totally caught me off guard. I was like, "What? Stew?!" Anyways, cute!

You think it is gonna be some life changing thing. Hu. *Smiles*

GENIUS!

That caught me SO off guard. I was thinking 'oh, this is going to be quite a serious story...'. How wrong was I? XD

This was seriously amazing though. Bravo!

that was funny lol

The end was imposible to see. Nicely done decieving me.

ROFL, PASTA?!
This really caught me off guard. Srsly lulz.

OH MY FREAKING GOD THIS MADE ME LAUGH! i was not expecting that at al! hehehehe LMAO Seriously that was freaking brilliant lol lol lol! You set it up so perfectly, seriously, I was totally like... 'aw' and then you dropped that line and I was like 'wtf? LOL'

okay so that wasn't the most coherent review, but you get my drift ;)

teehee ed and his tummy