A great story. Very good.

"Because in order to heal, a wound had to be a proper wound in the first place, didn't it?"
I congratulate you on writing a wonderful story with so many emotions packed in words- you really did a great job. And you almost made me cry. poor James. He knows that he can never have her- and in the end Will, who fell as deep, gained everything and James still had nothing. Really- wonderful story.

Very nice. Well written. Great idea. Thanks!