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| Crazy cat lady 2007-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abusesuper cute.. I love Nana so much and this story just seems to fit so well with it. good job |
| StainedGlass 2007-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou really brought out the perspective of Nobu after his confused break-up with Hachi. It was detailed and I'm very glad you did. But I'd like to comment though on some words you used such as Nana and Blackstones. From watching or reading the anime series, movies and manga, Nana Komatsu is known for the name Nana Osaki gave her, which is Hachiko or Hachi. May you should've used Hachi since throughout the whole story, she is narrated throughout the whole scenario, as Hachi. Plus, when Nana Komatsu / Hachi was introduced to the band, everybody got used to calling her Hachi, including Nobu. Probably using Hachi might be better for your next NANA fic. Same goes for Blackstones. Maybe you should use BLAST instead. More or less, I could really complain. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking forward to your followinf fics. :D |
| PrincessTin 2007-10-29 ch 1,  | abusesweet and short |
| onyx eyed kitten 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI like this! It seems like something Nobu really would think because although he is an adult he still seems to have this naive childlike quality to him. |
| SierralaineWalsh 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseAw~ I'm not much of a nobuxhachi fan.. But yeah, he's cute. It was a nice fic, too short though. T.T Heehee. Teecee, SierralaineWalsh |
| Lian 2007-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI believe you faithfully captured Nobu's innermost thoughts. |