Very poignant and beautiful story for such a thorny topic. You handled it well and I look forward to reading more of your works. This one was full of insight.

wow... i like the story... i must be perverse LMAO anyway, it's very well written and it kind of absorbs you into the storyline. very nice read =D

great story!

Ki... That was...beautifully written. LOve your writing, all the colors, shades, I mean wow... The ending was sweet... But that relationship..well as daddy dearest said..Special.. I read many fatherson incest yet this one,, left my thinking... Truly speacial...

That's, I don't know?, Hmm... Maybe a bit weird, though it's still nice. I was somehow expecting willycharlie action, and that came a bit short of unexpected. Though as I said nice. Willy somehow sees so...small, fragile in this story. Cute... Like it and hope ya update soon!
kisses&hugs,
L'uke-chan

Shouldn't the last part be an 'epilogue' not a 'prologue'?

This was a very intruiguing story to read, if a bit...odd. Odd is good though. It was a good read.

Gonna start writing this as I read. Makes it easier as I always have several things to point out.

This story makes Wilbur even scarier to me. XD;

Lol, Willy has a sexy butt~

~"has taken to a new game with the two bare hands; taking both of my hands into his, manipulating them until they are fanned apart for size comparison. His palm easily hides inside mine. It’s a playful gesture I’d seen young children do with their parents."

I've done that with my boyfriend before, and have to hold back the urge to do it with another certain someone. Why? I don't know as I'm in my "curious mode" and my mind goes blank or I just don't remember what I was thinking at the moment once I stop. Sometimes I also do so as reference, anatomy reference.
Or maybe I'm just weird like that...

~“M…” He looks at the floor. “I dunno…I…wanted to make some pleasant memories I suppose.”

When I read that out loud I automatically did the expression and voice Willy made when speaking with the shrink. Good job! I've always liked your stories because of how you always bring out the character so greatly, no matter what the theme is and even if it might strike (me) as out of character. You just make it sound IN character, and that's even scarier. :P While some other fics, even if the ideas fit just right not always do I picture the character as the way they are initially portrayed. They sounds as if they were made by a different actor sometimes.

Well, that ending left me speechless and anxious to read more.

You're making Dr. Wonka be very awesome. :D

This has always made me have thoughts of what would happen between those too when they met again and it breaks my brain. XD;
The "play with myself" part will always crack me up. I can just picture him saying it all spoiled like Veruca.