 Chibi-Roy-Chan 2009-12-06 . chapter 1 Wow i loved this! You know what would make it better though? Another chapter! Yep another chapter would make my Christmas! So please if you want that is, write another chapter or story for this!! :D |
 LovinTheTan 2009-04-20 . chapter 1KYAH! Sun-chan luffs you! You dont like the pairing? Youre so kinda and brave to venture into waters you are comfortable with then!! -gives you a cookie- I really liked it!! Both of them made me happy and I loved Bakuras "Im hitting on you" line :D So great!! Good job!! -faves- |
 Black-Neko-Chan 2008-04-26 . chapter 1Ah, very good! Nice length, and you wrote it so well for someone who doesn't like this pairing. Too bad, becuase I'm sure that you could make a lot more stories that I'd absolutely love.
As I said, you did a good job! I've never been on a cruise myself, but I think you captured how it might be pretty well. Heh, I know I'd probably hate one because of all the little kids. I hate children. They're very annoying.
I also didn't see any mistakes. Of course I really don't look for them when I'm reading, especially if I really like and get absorbed in the story, but that means if there were any they weren't very obvious ones. |
 Voice-sama 2008-03-19 . chapter 1I demand MOAR, W-chan. |
 Artemis 85 2008-01-18 . chapter 1could you be totally awesome and make me another chapter? |
 Anime-fan Meepa 2007-10-26 . chapter 1Okay, so Nevi and I talked it over, and we've decided to adopt you. Of course, I'm going to punch you in the eye for the Hannah Montana comment, but. :D;;
But. ;-; Thank you so much for making yourself kinda-sick writing this! I love it to death. I love YOU to death. -tackles-
If I wasn't like. Half-dead from sleep deprivation, I would totally make retarded jokes or something. Or, you know, actually review the story. xD;
And remember: Malik's from Egypt, not Africa.
~Cecilia |
 Glitnir-Gebo 2007-10-25 . chapter 1I'm not really a fan of shounenai, but I really liked this story. It was sweet. |
 BakuraxMalikNum1Fan 2007-10-25 . chapter 1o me likey. Wish there could have been more to it but good job XD |
 Ryous lil Tenshi 2007-10-25 . chapter 1E! -uberglomp- BAKURA AND MALIK! That's like, my third favourite pairing ever! YAYY!!
Great fic too, BTW. You just catch the nilhilistic teenager wavelength so well, it just makes me so jealous XD
Oh, and no, you shouldn't read Control. In fact, I forbid you to. Because it's crap, and the only reason I'm continuing it is because I've been writing that Ryou and Bakura for two years, and I just can't leave it unresolved like that, it's not right. Starting fics and finshing them is not right. Yes. -.-
"Just Know" Is a sappy accoustic song by New Zealand's most hard-out nu-metal band (Blindspott) That they used to play as the theme song for a pair of young lovers on a TV show. Then the chick died X.x; Which is why it's sad. But yes. I need to shut up and stop rambling.
Anyways, you need to write more shit! In your own time. And in fact, I absolutely cannot talk because I'm not even writing anything myself n.n; But yes.
You're like, one of the very last good Tendershipping Authors that still hang around this dump. XD Keep up the good work and it's great to see diversity! And you pulled it off so well!
-LANA ! |
 Dekora 2007-10-24 . chapter 1Ahh, this made me so happy!! But you cut it off too soon. ;- ; So mean of you!
I think my cruise idea with Malik/Ryou, since that's my OTP #2. (Psychoshipping for the win, lolol. Can you imagine -them- on a cruise, holy shit.) But this was most excellentt! I love this pairing sosososo much! Ee!
And we are becoming good buddies, haha, how could you even imagine that!? But thank you so much! ;- ; I know I will feel much better soon, or at least I hope so.
I hope Cecilia and I get to go on a cruise. ;-; I may be going to Disney World this summer with my parents and I'm going to take her if I can!! That would be so wonderful. -dreamdream- |
 Rannaty 2007-10-24 . chapter 1I thouhgt this was a good read :) I'm a fan of Thiefshipping, not as big of a fan as I used to be but anyways. It was entertaining and the interection was funny. There was a few mistakes but I think they were already mentioned in some other review so I won't do that again. I don't know about the realismn as I've never worked on a ship (I was on a cruise once.. the food was crap xD). Yes, anyways, I liked :D |
 Pyjamas 2007-10-24 . chapter 1Oh, is good! I was going through all my old pictures today and found some Bakura x Malik ones that I'd forgotten I had, so I was very happy to get an email telling me about a Bakura x Malik fic :D
There were a couple of mistakes, like I think you wrote 'fairy' instead of 'ferry' (not sure whether it was intentional or not xD) and Bakura had already called Malik by his name before he actually asked what his name was. But details, details. I've never cared much for details. Twas a wonderful fic, and you've satisfied my craving for Bakura x Malik :D |
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