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| Kitten Kisses 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseOnly mistake I found was "in and out of hospital" instead of "in and out of the hospital". =) Ahh, Joseph... I loved Oscar's interaction with him. He was wise beyond his years and such a sweetheart. This 'fic portrays him rather well, I think. His childish, though completely innocent and beautiful infatuation with Oscar was...perfect in the anime, and brought to life just as well with this AU. How fitting that she should be a teacher and he her young student, still diseased, still waiting. Ah, but Joseph, you will find someone else; keep waiting, keep waiting. Lovely job. Cheers, -Manna |
| Nana 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseVery poignant and well-written. Do write more! |
| lunascorpio 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseOh, little Joseph. He's so pure and wise beyond his young age. It's a lovely rendition of his character in modern times. Keep writing. Hugs. Luna |