awh
this is why u dont need to kill richard!
i tink u should supprise us, ur really an amazing writer, like for cereal :D

Dude you made them break up? Koris got a big temper huh? Gosh its heart ach ally isnt it?! O well ill read the next 1 dont worry ill review!x i liked the use of drama!

Oh, sad ending! D:
Great story though!! :D

This is a great sequel. I really liked it. I feel as if the characters changed and that's a good thing. It's very important to have character development in a story, as well as some drama. And trust me, you got both of those things down.

A little tip: When you are doing dialouge between two people you dont have to keep putting, he said this, she said this, he said that, she said that. You can start it out like that but after a couple of lines you dont need it unless someone new enters the scene.

The ending really surprised me. I didn't think Richard and Kory would break up after everything that happened. But I'm glad it was Kory who walked away. In the last story she was smitten with him and the fact that she was able to move on shows that she's gotten stronger. So five stars for that.

Lol, one of my favorite moments in this sequel was when Richard surprised her at the spa.

It broke my heart when Kory and Xavier broke up, really it did. I just love them as a couple and personally I think Kory can do better than Richard. But I liked how everything flowed with her little love triangle. Another five stars for you.

OMG DUDE! I had the same idea for my story! I wanted one of my girls to get pregnant and lose the baby in a car accident! Dude... What can I say, great minds think alike.

You did very well with this story. I enjoyed it. ^_^

Love the story; and that “You will ruin your shoes” of Richard remembered me of the Legally Blonde movie!

XOXO

Woah...that was brilliant!I can't wait for the sequel!You are one of the best authors of

OMFG!...yes, i'm totally gonna kill u 4 this! I'm so upset it ended lyke that! And since Gar and Rachael broke up I guess that means I can have him now?? lol jus kidding. Im about 2 go read the next chapter of "Walking wih the Damned" so my heart won't be so broken about this...sad...SAD...ENDING!! WAH!! :-) But if there's a sequal. I'll be alright!

Lotz Ov Love,
Beast Boys Wifey

Ok, i DO NOT suggest a cliff hanger as the very end of the story. People DO NOT just want to guess what happenes next, and never get a sure answer. They want to read it, because reading it makes their mind KNOW that it's real. So cliff hanger endings are HORRIBLE! Never let your readers choose their path for the story in their mind.

If you want to make another sequal to this story, that would be fine. Because it is contiuous, and not a cliffy. I like the idea of them going to colledge. But sticking with this story will get you more readers and reviewers, so your pick.

Hope i helped! Let me know when your sequal is up!

-Alien

you know i havent used my pistol in awhile... i have a reason to use it now...

lol, kidding...mostly

i vote to start the sequel

*Faints*

OhmiGod!

I so don't hate you... although I'm considering shooting you... not!

Please update soon!

Starry

OHMYGOSH!
Both of the guys are single now!
NO!
Dont end it!
That's cruel!
NO!
=/
UPDATE!

You should do a short epilogue...but, if you ended it here...that's be really...nail biting...^_^

Royal.

hey as long as they end up together in the end i am fine with what ever you do

That's so sad they broke up =(

-faints-
Oh My God.
X_X They broke up!!
NO!

Royal.