 Toki Mirage 2009-10-31 . chapter 13*cackles* YEAH! WOOT! You know how much I like the idea of Takumi kicking ass in someone else's car. *grins* Update when you can!
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 DCWestby 2009-10-26 . chapter 13Excellent work, hope you update soon.. |
 kurahieiritr JIO 2009-10-26 . chapter 13Awesome couple chapters for a story line. I like how you use Takumi's adaptability factors in this chapter, although I am not certain that 15 minutes would be enough for him to perform a drift. Yet, the way you have him adapting so fast makes us all aware of how rare a driver Takumi is. Having him drive the Tiger is an interesting element in this story. I would have expected Ryosuke to have him drive the FC once the springs broke in the Trueno. I do believe Ryosuke would have trusted Takumi more than Keisuke would. I don't see Keisuke as the sharing type at all. :) Besoides, Keisuke would have a fit if his arch rival in driving touched his car. I think Keisuke would be threatened, while Ryosuke would be indulgent based on their personality types.
I think Molly's American big hearted aspect is a great truth among us old school street scene drivers too. Molly is very old school in many ways. I have allowed people with skill to drive my slaved over babies, with me in shotgun on a few occasions, and to see another American female step up to the plate in old school fashion warms the heart.
Still need to read over the chapters before you post though. I noticed several wrong words that were spelled correctly, but were the wrong word. Examples are things like had, when you meant hat, (Last chapter actually) and similar context terms.
Keep up the great work and finish this story line. :) I want to see how it turns out! |
 Dragon Reverb 2009-10-26 . chapter 13Nice chapter, I like the way of how Bill is potrayed in this.. Very careful and keeping it up no matter how underesitimated the opponent can be.
I would like to see how his friends will handle Keisuke and the rest once they realise how good they really are.
And just wondering.. is Sung like from Tokyo japan and driven with the driver of a 900hp Charger Or I'm just misunderstanding? |
 DraejonSoul 2009-09-18 . chapter 12Ugh. The chance to race just came and went in the same chapter. Poor Ryousuke. And Mike read him spot on, though it did help knowing someone who was in Japan then. Do we get to know who this person was? Did that person ever battled with the RedSuns? |
 DraejonSoul 2009-09-18 . chapter 11Hey there! It's been a while since I dropped by this section. I'm glad you've updated.
You are such a tease! Dangling the prospect of racing again in front of Ryousuke's nose (and mine!). You know how a lot of folks would like to see him race again. Okay, so he doesn't get a chance in this race, but would he get another crack at it? |
 Dragon Reverb 2009-08-19 . chapter 12Nice... can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE!! |
 kurahieiritrJIO 2009-08-13 . chapter 11 Well MArgrave a nice addition to the chapters you have already placed here. I liked the racing action as always. I like the way you have Nakazato going base line to ballistic in his race. That is very much to his nature. Such touches are a great way to remind us of how a person is on the inside.
I did notice a few grammer, spelling, and tense prolems as well as being in too many heads at once. Have you considered staying with only one character's thoughts at a time? Or setting up the different character Point of view as seperated segments specifically? You do that with the race sequences, but the Mike and Ryosuke setting bleed together and I was not always certain of who had control since you had both thinking at the same time.
I hope to see more chapters from you in the future since I have been off line for a while myself. Take care and keep writing. |
 Davante009 2009-08-12 . chapter 11that was great. when is the last part of it coming out |
 Dragon Reverb 2009-08-10 . chapter 11Wow... Ryosuke back in action? That is one tough race to write.. especially when he is still a little better than Takumi and Keisuke. |
 JDMwolfen 2009-07-09 . chapter 1Just like what Scythe said v
I love how you describe the cars engine specs,and your so specific in the races which was what im loving ^_^
Im glad more Project D in America ^ ^ |
 FREEBIRDGTX 2009-07-07 . chapter 10Dude, sweet so far man. When are we gonna see some MOPAR. And are the boys of Project D are gonna go down south meet some good ole boys of dixie. eh eh eh!! |
 stephen koontz 2009-06-29 . chapter 10 man this story is really good, i looked today and saw you updated it and i was so happy, keep it up. and well i would offer to help you with parts and aftermarket parts but it seems from what i have read your very intune and inteligent with the racing sceen(i know i cant spell) as am i because i do race, i own a 77 trans am with 630 rwhp and 660 trq and that number is going to be incressed as soon as i put my new super charger on the 455 big block resting under the hood mated to a richmond 5 speed and a 3.73 biult rearend and i also drive a 400 hp 09 subaru wrx and more will come as soon as i add my boost controller and retune the ecu |
 Dragon Reverb 2009-06-26 . chapter 1Finally... UPDATE! |
 Scythe1313 2009-05-16 . chapter 9As I said in the pm, you're one of the two best writers I've read in the fandom. Most of the writers (because of their lack of any car knowledge) choose to focus solely on the relationships between the characters and almost totally exclude the racing altogether. For an Initial D fanfic that just doesn't work (And that's why I'll probably never post a fic in this fandom either-I know exactly jack shit about cars). |