Reviews for Flickering lights of you and me

Reviews For: Flickering lights of you and me

typemagic72 2008-03-25 ch 2,	abuseuh is it ingrid michaelson...corner of your heart?
salote 2007-12-26 ch 2,	abuseOh, this was good. I hope that you continue. I want to know what happens next! :D
Hyuugagirl 2007-12-21 ch 2, anon.	abuseReally liked this! Although I think the song lyrics were a little odd during some of the moments you were writing, like the sleep underneath your bed parts. I love NejixHinata! they would make such cute babies!
FanofInulover 2007-12-21 ch 2,	abuseaw...this has such a sad feel to it. I liked it though, good job
Rawr4cookies 2007-11-06 ch 1,	abuseOh, how I love this, especially the caption of whats within this chapter! I love how HInata takes care of Neji, sos weet, please continue!
crookedsmile 2007-11-01 ch 1,	abuseyou always make me smile. your srories I mean... this is good. if you plan to continue it please do :)
Polites 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuse-sneaks in- Yeah I was reading this, and then I felt like shaving, so I went to go shave, my mind still on the this story, and then I accidentally cut myself with the Gillette 3 blade disposable razor. Yeah so we're even, broken nail for this small but irritating cut on my cheek... Lol anyway.. Yeah, nice story, with perhaps my favorite alternative couple from Naruto. A great menu of imagery to choose from, but I enjoyed reading the single line about the flashback. The way I read it, the connotations of those warm words in that sentence and simultaneously, the way the 'pearly cheeks tinge with a pale pink' bounces off the tongue is fantastic. Absolutely great tasting, and you should do dessert next... if you aren't too busy. Love the conceptual part too. Neji, it turns out, was the one making the cry noises. Neji's pretty lucky too... I wish if I was in bed, I could pretend to cry [I never, ever cry] and this girl comes in, and then I whisper the magic words "I don't want to sleep alone..." Great job, you are well practiced in the liberal arts. (Btw, imouto-chan, I just found out that you have this secret mafia network... one of them tracked me and demanded to know why I wasn't communicating with you, lol! And then I felt bad, as that was kinda true. So fearful for my life, I'm going to review a few of your things more often, lol... -Polites)
anon 2007-10-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh, this was pretty. I love NejiHina, they are so cute! Nice title by the way. continue!
salote 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abuseyou're imagery is quite powerful. well done.
FanofInulover 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abuseShe’s only a little girl…she’s only a little, little girl. And he, he is only a little, little boy. In need of someone, in need of her. And for once, she feels needed and that’s enough. that whole line got to me-really, it did, so amazing so ridiculously amazing. and so sad, oh man, i was hoping for something FUNNY and happy and when are you going to do something funny! Do the highschool fic but make it funny like Neji jealous and protective and all that, i thought this was cute as a one-shot, so maybe you should keep it as it is, but knowing you might continue it and it will be wonderful. Anyways, great stuff as always, I love Hyuugacest!

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