Awsome story! Can't wait for more! But please tel me Ann-whatever and what-not isn't going to be a sob!

Hey there,

I know I've already reviewed for other chapters but I just thought I'd ask what happened? Where did the updates go? This story is sosososo good and I've been in suspense for so long! Another chapter coming soon? Pretty Please?

rose x

i love the way Jack calls her 'kitty kat'. taunting yet adorable.

Not convinced by 'jackie jack' though. It's a bit sickly and wet. Katherine is sweet and innocent most of the time but can borderline annoying at times.

otherwise, i love the rest, especially the jealous brothers. And Jack is very much in character. I just would like to see Katherine a bit more... feisty? meh... maybe it's just me. :)

keep up the good work

xx

loving it

keep the updates comming :)

rose x

I was glad to see Katherine finally awake...and the connection between she and Jack is very interesting. I also love to see the three siblings together. You are very good at showing the close bond between them. Can't wait to see what else happens.

-Rory4

Yeah I love this story! Hope your house is okay after the attack of the builders, electrcians, plumers etc. anways...I can't wait for the next chapter!

Very cool love your girl character hope she straightens out ol' Jack for all of us lol update soon!

well u are rebilding ur house LOL

dont worry i like she is falling for jack i hpe he feels the same way i dont want to see Jack's head in a spear because of the 2 jealous brothers

see ya soon

i still am in love with this story

Oh my goodness! It's lovely! I'm loving Jack. You've got him down pat, in my opinion. Please update soon! Much love! xoxo

Hm... good story. Please write more soon?/

poor mouse shes so confused... plz write more soon.

i sorry but we've all got school gud chap though.

cute chapter. . poor Kat. :3

Jack was adorable.

thanks for updating!

I really like this story.

At first I didn't think Jack going for someone nick-named Mouse would really work...

But you may just convince me. :D