 Lucifer's Lament 2009-09-11 . chapter 5This is strangely fasinating, PetitDejeuner. I liked this chapter, the little arguments between Sakura and Neji are entertaining.
...ug, too much formal language. Please update soon, I really look forward to the next chapter. |
 ItaSaku29 2009-07-11 . chapter 5Yay for romance in the next chapter! This is really cute. I think the storyline is great! I can't wait to see what is coming up next! |
 CrAzYaNiMeFrEaKgUrL 2009-03-17 . chapter 5awesome story, i'm getting so drawn in that i need the next chappie out NOW!! hee hee :) |
 GentleWaterSoul 2009-03-17 . chapter 5I'm sad! I see this story hasn't been updated in a year or so! I hope you didn't lose focus on the story because it's so different, I really like it.
Something I should point out are that in a couple of places you've forgotten what was said. Ex was that you said Neji and Sakura were leaving and left Sai and then a few sentences later, Sai was there again.
Also I'm confused about the whole work out office and why Naruto would ring his own doorbell. |
 Aurora Celestine 2008-12-01 . chapter 1I love it! :)
It's extremely well written and I just think this idea is pretty spiffy.
Great job!!
:D |
 Chris's girl 14 2008-09-19 . chapter 5Ohh, I like this story. It's fantastic. The story is easy on the eyes, and it's easy to read too! It's enjoyable, and it never gets boring. Overall, it's an excellent piece of writing. Keep up the wonderful work! |
 silverymoonfire 2008-08-11 . chapter 5you did an amazing job writing this story so far update soon :) |
 HawaitoNami 2008-06-30 . chapter 5Wow, amazing, your writing is.
You have to update! ^-^ |
 Pathseekerme 2008-05-04 . chapter 5Fantastic! Keep writing! *picture a cheerleader here, madly waving pompoms in your favorite colors!* |
 Sorrelstar 2008-04-06 . chapter 5so good! Do you plan on updating anymore? Because it's really good! I look foward to more chapters!
Lurve Sorrelstar |
 divine-chaos13 2008-03-26 . chapter 5wow! I'm not usually into AU, but you are doing a great job! |
 darkonex852 2008-03-05 . chapter 5I just love your take on NejiSaku and how you've managed to make everything fit so seemlessly together. The banter between the couple is really cute and I'm looking forward to your next update :)
cheers
darkie |
 ColouredSkies 2008-02-26 . chapter 5Well...that was...catching Oo
I never thought an AU fanfic would catch my attention...but you're really good at this. So original...you managed to give every character possible arole in the whole thing...and the plot - so original and...so true by the way. I hope you continue to write, i can't wait to see what happens next ;) |
 ToxiqueA. 2008-02-11 . chapter 5Like it! update soon! |
 queenofbitches 2008-02-08 . chapter 5The chapters are INTENSELY long... but it's good. I just picture gaara whenever neji comes in... hope ur not offensed. :D |