"I ain’t tellin’ you this for my health."
LOL! that's SO Bobby! lol

hm...cool :)
I like it! good job! :)

I love it keep it up. ^_^

What a fantastic story. We've only met Bela once this season and this fic made me feel rather sad for her. And Bobby is a great voice of reason, exasperation and warning here. Nice job!

Ooh, nice.

What an original thought! I loved it!

Yay it's up! And I liked that description bit about the light from the laptop reflecting off certain objects in the room - sneaky way to slip the description in there! :)

Bela.

I need to find out more about this .. . character. Note the absence of any defining adjective, there. I am . . . shall we say, warily intrigued? :) COOL fic!

*pokes for 'Unfurl'* :P

Love the tiny bit of backstory you wrote for Bela here - like you, I'm still on the fence with her. A couple of episodes might be fun, half a season might not.

You captured her voice perfectly, and the idea of her having had this relationship with Bobby - a similar relationship to one Sam and Dean might have had with him - was intriguing.

This was wonderful. :)

You captured Bela flawlessly. We haven't seen much of her, but you also had her voice down perfectly.

I loved this idea of her back story. Simple, and very fitting. I also loved the connection with Bobby. It struck me a little odd that he knew her so well...

Incredible work! :)

Ani-maniac494

Terrific writing as always!

Love gruff Bobby clearly defining where he stands re: the Winchesters and Bela's wiles failing to make an impact on him. I agree that Dean should stay angry at Bela for shooting Sam but alas, I get the feeling that Sam's injury will fall by the wayside in favor of a romance...sigh...I'd rather have a good old fashioned, straightforward adversarial storyline