Wow. I have no words for this! Simply amazing :-)

You said in the beginning that she was part something other than human, any explination on that? Or did you and I just missed it?

great story and everything, but i reckon you should have gone with a Sarah/Jareth fic...

not that i'm complaining! this was perfect!

Your's

SeductiveSorceress

Sir Didyimis instead of Sir Diddamus.

You know this is a nice chapter, because of this you will have to write more chapters. :-)

Jareth not Jereth

Very good chapter. I enjoyed it very much. More please if you have time to do it. :-)

Good job. I can't wait til your next update.

A cool chapter. I enjoyed reading it. More please. :-)