 isabella nightmare 2008-06-18 . chapter 2 i really like this story becuase after so long every parent chackls up |
 HaChosenOne 2007-11-05 . chapter 2Excellent! |
 GCTIGERFAN1 2007-11-03 . chapter 2i really liked it because u described their parents so well. I will say one thing though, being a latina myself i can tell u that hispanic parents are rarely ok with their son being gay. But you interpreted them pretty well. So good job and keep going with this, can't wait till u update. |
 crzyRENThead 2007-11-02 . chapter 2I really like this idea. It makes me laugh. Definitely keep going on this! I like how you made Angel's Parents accepting of who she is. Not many people can do that, so thanks. Keep up the great work!!
-Patsy |
 writingtiger 2007-11-01 . chapter 2Oh my gosh. Maureen and Joanne's parents will be a kick. So is it just one of those things that everyone's parents are showing up at almost the exact same times at each apartment? |
 x-dairokkan-x 2007-10-30 . chapter 2AW, Angel's parents are so nice! I love them! Collins's parents are cruel... Gr...
Okey-doo, constructive criticism time! I think both sets of parents came and went a little too quickly, it seemed like they were only there for a minute and then left right away, which is kind of weird...
Also, you said "ME and you father". It should be "Your father and I"
:) Love it!
Panda |
 Det. Flawless 2007-10-30 . chapter 2Ang's parents remind me of my own lol |
 Chick'llDanceInTheFlame 2007-10-30 . chapter 2I say Mark and Roger's were the greatest. |
 x Rajah x 2007-10-30 . chapter 2I enjoyed it. Stupid Collins' parents, though. :( |
 Fangirl44 2007-10-30 . chapter 2ok so besides the bohemians that were at the apartments none of the others know the other parents are there |
 Fangirl44 2007-10-26 . chapter 1really good so far update really soon |
 SapphireNight 2007-10-25 . chapter 1Hehe, I like this!! Possibly slightly unrealistic that everyones parents would turn up at the same time, but hey, this is fiction, so it doesnt really matter all that much, and its one hell of a great oppertunity for a great fanfic! And you seem to have definatly risen to the challenge.
I like how you opened the story- very nice setting up of where we are, whats happened (or slightly changed) since the end of the Rent film, and basically setting things up. You gotta pretty good writing style too- and having looked at your profile page, you also wrote 'Stars in the Sky', so yeah, youre a tallented writer!
I look forward to reading future chapters. Very intrigued about the next one- like DramaQueenMaureen, Im also rather interested to see what the Collins's make of Angel, and how Angel's parents react to her- do they know shes a queen? And if they do, how comfortable are they with it? |
 x-dairokkan-x 2007-10-24 . chapter 1"Mark gave his best friend a ‘how-do-you-do-that?’ look, and Roger returned it with his famous ‘I’m-Roger-I-can-do-anything’ look." Ha! I love it, can't wait for more! AND YOU FOUND A TITLE! And it's way better than what I thought of... :P Nice.
*runs off to stop kitten from destroying my project*
Viva la vie Boheme,
Panda! |
 EschewingObfuscation 2007-10-24 . chapter 1this is fun! a little goofy, but it made me smile, and if it can do that when i have a paper due in less than twelve hours... |
 Det. Flawless 2007-10-24 . chapter 1*evil laughter*
Hahaha you better torture A/C! LOL |