Thanx for the thanx. I really appreciate it. And anyhow, the way you wrote out this one was I think the most accurate and had enough detail to keep me going. I'm really looking forward to how you're going to portray Jin giving in to his darkness in the next one.

I love cliff-hangers, well done.

Another great chapter! I love the interpretation of the trailer of Tekken 4. It's really deep and detailistic. I can't wait for the next one. Catch ya later.

A great job on another great chapter. Wow. Short, but it got the job done. Laters.

Gr8 job! Well done, I can't wait to read how he ends up in Brisbane in the next chapter. The details were excellent, props!

Nice idea, but I can tell your're a beginner in writing. Your POV is far out in the sky. Try to get inside Jin's head a little more and put his thoughts and feelings(both physical and mental)out in his view. If you don't get what I'm saying, try this link. It has many other writing tutorials to choose from.

Byakuya Angel,

Thanks! Not sure yet but probably.

Great job! I like how you brought Nina and Anna into it now. Will she have more of a role in the next chapter? Just wondering.

Great job! I wondered how the two of them met, anyway. Laters.

Awesome my dear!
It seems that you have alot of talent!
And i like that you used official scenes from tekken
i think that you must write the plot of the tekken movie becuse as i've read the director don't know anything about Tekken(-_-*)

~~Yo(^__^)Ko~~

Good chapter; I recognised the scenes from Tekken Tag, and Panda's Tekken ending. Keep up the good work.

Nice one! I remember watching Panda's Tekken 4 ending. It almost made me cry...not really. Later.

Wow, you're just as good writing fanfics as you are making fanvideos, and that's saying something! =] Oh, and I'm KazamaGirl at Tekken Ning, and MalfoyzGirl on YouTube, in case you were wondering who I am. Keep writing and making Tekken stuff! =]

I really liked this chapter; the Kuma part was funny, but I felt sad knowing that Heihachi,with all his generosity at present, would betray Jin one day. Keep it up!

It's Awesome!!
Well i love this kind of stories you explained
Jin's story very good!Jin's a very interesting character
but some people just don't understand this.
Greets..