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| Byakuya Angel 2008-10-02 ch 12,  | abuseI love cliff-hangers, well done. |
| Byakuya Angel 2008-07-14 ch 10, | abuseAnother great chapter! I love the interpretation of the trailer of Tekken 4. It's really deep and detailistic. I can't wait for the next one. Catch ya later. |
| Byakuya Angel 2008-05-16 ch 9, | abuseA great job on another great chapter. Wow. Short, but it got the job done. Laters. |
| Byakuya Angel 2008-03-30 ch 8, | abuseGr8 job! Well done, I can't wait to read how he ends up in Brisbane in the next chapter. The details were excellent, props! |
| Terrastorm 2008-02-14 ch 6, | abuseNice idea, but I can tell your're a beginner in writing. Your POV is far out in the sky. Try to get inside Jin's head a little more and put his thoughts and feelings(both physical and mental)out in his view. If you don't get what I'm saying, try this link. It has many other writing tutorials to choose from. |
| SonKitty 2008-02-05 ch 6, | abuseByakuya Angel, Thanks! Not sure yet but probably. |
| Byakuya Angel 2008-02-05 ch 6, | abuseGreat job! I like how you brought Nina and Anna into it now. Will she have more of a role in the next chapter? Just wondering. |
| Byakuya Angel 2008-01-22 ch 5, | abuseGreat job! I wondered how the two of them met, anyway. Laters. |
| Yoko.Jin 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseAwesome my dear! It seems that you have alot of talent! And i like that you used official scenes from tekken i think that you must write the plot of the tekken movie becuse as i've read the director don't know anything about Tekken(-_-*) ~~Yo(^__^)Ko~~ |
| Divinely Ethereal 2007-11-15 ch 4, | abuseGood chapter; I recognised the scenes from Tekken Tag, and Panda's Tekken ending. Keep up the good work. |
| Byakuya Angel 2007-11-14 ch 4, | abuseNice one! I remember watching Panda's Tekken 4 ending. It almost made me cry...not really. Later. |
| SweetPinkDragon 2007-11-13 ch 4, | abuseWow, you're just as good writing fanfics as you are making fanvideos, and that's saying something! =] Oh, and I'm KazamaGirl at Tekken Ning, and MalfoyzGirl on YouTube, in case you were wondering who I am. Keep writing and making Tekken stuff! =] |
| Divinely Ethereal 2007-11-04 ch 3, | abuseI really liked this chapter; the Kuma part was funny, but I felt sad knowing that Heihachi,with all his generosity at present, would betray Jin one day. Keep it up! |
| sparking 2007-11-04 ch 3, | abuseIt's Awesome!! Well i love this kind of stories you explained Jin's story very good!Jin's a very interesting character but some people just don't understand this. Greets.. |
| Byakuya Angel 2007-11-03 ch 3, | abuseWow, nice one. I never expected anyone to write out how promising Heihachi seemed to everyone. Later. |