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Rekhyt
2008-06-29
ch 17,
abuseMany thanks for the shipping, and I trust you can remember this fic exists without my prompting now?

My two favorite lines:

going around with a murder suspect is a sin in the eyes of God (and more importantly, the church)

and

"Remind me to never listen to you again.”

“Isn’t that self-contradictory?”
The known author
2008-06-26
ch 17,
abuseBwhahahaha! Bartimaeus got strip searched!
Great chapter again. Can't wait for the next.
The Wineglass
2008-06-26
ch 17,
abuselol. -imagines blond!Nathaniel-

agh, the suspense... -glares at evil cliffie-
Nethernity
2008-06-11
ch 16,
abusewah!
Nathaniel's revenge!
and a blond Nathaniel?
hm...
I'd like to see that.
The known author
2008-06-11
ch 16,
abuseNow we got something going! Amazing chapter, great of you to connect the book's events to this chapter. Now cue Bartimaeus...
Molly
2008-06-07
ch 15, anon.
abuseWonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon, please!
Rekhyt
2008-06-07
ch 15,
abuse"look like you could kill a person just by sneezing in their general direction"

French, was he?

And really, Radiohead is the perfect alibi for a funeral dirge -- it covers both the weird and the depressing!

Today's color is blue, by the way. Less boring than white, don't you think?
tanyart
2008-06-07
ch 15,
abuseAnd... and it just stops there? I'm in a current state of utter despair!

But on a different note, this story still has me captivated. I can see the similar parallels, but I still can't imagine how this will turn out. You writing for Kitty, Nathaniel, and Barty are excellent! For some reason, I really love reading Nathaniel's part. He just has this practical, oblivious voice and you do it perfectly.

Great chapter, I can't wait for the next!
The known author
2008-06-03
ch 15,
abuseSweet! Finally we are going along! London City Police...wonder what Bart's going to pull off.
The Wineglass
2008-06-03
ch 15,
abuseBartimaeus is so much fun... you characterized him really well. I loved all his snarky comments... Nice chapter!
The Wineglass
2008-05-30
ch 14,
abuseo... very dramatic... cliffie...

Nice chapter like usual!
baeryl
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseI liked this, it is interesting.
There will be no magic right?
The Wineglass
2008-04-26
ch 13,
abuseO... the tension deepens... but no fluff! :(
Rekhyt
2008-04-14
ch 12,
abuseWell here it is, the long rambling review that I promised you ages and ages ago! Okay, okay, four days ago. But it feels like ages and if you count the wee hours of Friday morning as Thursday, then five days! See what I mean? Ages and ages.

*blinks* If that's me rambling without trying, what's going to happen when I try to ramble? It does not bear considering. Now, what was all this about... oh! That's right! The fic. Got it.

I really enjoyed getting Kitty messing with Nathaniel's head from her perspective. There's also been something strangely familiar about all these chapters, which I'm sure is, at the least, representative of how spot-on the characterization is. (But perhaps it's all the shipping too -- Kitty's mum reminded me of you at one point. And what does that indicate, hmm?)

These chapters were definitely some of the best part of my weekend, when I was reading them. (Although getting extra sleep was pretty cool too. Just saying.) I'm still not sure how I missed so many of them being up, but they were well worth the accidental, self-imposed wait. I can't wait to see more.

Dear God, I've written a novel here, haven't I? And not a particularly good one, either -- more like a summer beach read. Well, enough's enough! [FIN.]
SilkenPetal
2008-04-10
ch 12,
abuseHappy you updated, I really like this fic. Speaking of Barty fics I like there was once a story on this site called 'terms of Endearment' it was a kitty and nathanial fic about his diary I was wondering if you know what happened to it or who wrote it, cause it disappeared, (I ask everyone this so don't worry). Anyway I really like this and can't wait for the next chapter.
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