 pg416 2009-08-30 . chapter 1Damn, your portrayal of Bartimaeus is spot on.
Love the story overall, very well written and an entertaining read.
(I've read it about five times).
:) |
 beautyfrompain 2009-05-27 . chapter 22awesome story, very realistic and funny. it was fun to read, although it left a lot to the imagination |
 A.B. 2008-10-11 . chapter 22 Yay! I love this story! And I loved the ending, thank you so much for the wonderful story. This story makes me happy :) |
 The Wineglass 2008-10-10 . chapter 22Nice ending... it fits... even though I would have wanted more of the actual Nat/Kitty... still very open-ended and the last line made me smile.
Nice story! |
 midnitefaeri 2008-10-10 . chapter 3a boy and a demon with a flashy cover... i wonder what book that was. lol
The flashy cover was the only reason i picked amulet of samarkand up from the library. Good thing i did too. They're my favorties now. |
 Cheesey Goodness 2008-10-10 . chapter 22Oh, no. It's all over! What is my purpose in life now?
I love this fiction all the way through. It was highly entertaining and I think you captured everyone's [especially Bartimaeus's] personalities perfectly.
Hmm...About the ending. I think it was almost similar to the ending of the actual series in that it kind of leaves you at a place where anything can happen, but what that is is up to you. We're going to have to make this story its own fanfiction category so people can write alternate endings and such!
Good job. |
 FftPorcupine 2008-10-03 . chapter 21 This is such a funny story :D
Please update soon, can't wait to find out the end.
Last time I checked BT section, there were about 50 fan fics, one of yours included, and I must say I really enjoy your writing style. |
 The Girl Who Was Tueday 2008-09-28 . chapter 21 HUFFGHASJFL;AKJSDFL;AJD
Completely kick ** story.
You must update soon or a kitten will implode. |
 The Wineglass 2008-09-20 . chapter 21... ha ha to Lovelace. That is all.
Poor Amanda, though... |
 SA 2008-09-17 . chapter 21 I was looking forward to this so much and was so glad when it came up. You really have Bartimaeus' wit down to a tee. |
 Grey Blade 2008-09-10 . chapter 1No way...No way now way no way nowaynowaynowaynoway...
O:
TWENTY chapters?! WOW! Last time I checked this had like...3? 4? This was really unexpected since BT isn't one of the more populated sites I've been to, and almost all of the stories I've read here so far become forlorn in the end. I kinda lost hope for the fanfics here because of that.
You do not know how happy you've made me by updating regularly. I really do hope you keep it up because this would be one of the better, if not best, fanfictions I've read on the entirety of the site. And that's just based on the first few chapters I've read in the past. Thank you so much for updating and keeping my hopes and love for the utter genious-ness of the Bartimaeus Trilogy alight, even if this IS set in an alternate universe |
 TheWatcherandReader 2008-09-07 . chapter 20Well this is sweet. I haven't read a Bartimaeus fic in yonks, let alone a good one. Bart's as awesome as always, which is good. And the Nat/Kitty thing is pretty awesome in itself. Keep on updating. |
 narutolover930 2008-09-06 . chapter 20OMG!! when is the next chapter gonna come out!! i have been waiting foeva TT-TT, well, at least since, well, the last time a chapter came out!! i |
 Sangre Azul 2008-08-30 . chapter 20This story is amazingly written. Your Bartimaeus perspective is so realistic and it's a really fresh take on the story.
I hope that this is updated soon |
 Rekhyt 2008-08-21 . chapter 20Very nice, although I'm inclined to think that Kitty would've been the one to accept the gun from Bartimaeus (who apparently has some kind of deep dark secrety past!). |