Damn, your portrayal of Bartimaeus is spot on.
Love the story overall, very well written and an entertaining read.
(I've read it about five times).
:)

awesome story, very realistic and funny. it was fun to read, although it left a lot to the imagination

Yay! I love this story! And I loved the ending, thank you so much for the wonderful story. This story makes me happy :)

Nice ending... it fits... even though I would have wanted more of the actual Nat/Kitty... still very open-ended and the last line made me smile.

Nice story!

a boy and a demon with a flashy cover... i wonder what book that was. lol
The flashy cover was the only reason i picked amulet of samarkand up from the library. Good thing i did too. They're my favorties now.

Oh, no. It's all over! What is my purpose in life now?

I love this fiction all the way through. It was highly entertaining and I think you captured everyone's [especially Bartimaeus's] personalities perfectly.

Hmm...About the ending. I think it was almost similar to the ending of the actual series in that it kind of leaves you at a place where anything can happen, but what that is is up to you. We're going to have to make this story its own fanfiction category so people can write alternate endings and such!

Good job.

This is such a funny story :D
Please update soon, can't wait to find out the end.
Last time I checked BT section, there were about 50 fan fics, one of yours included, and I must say I really enjoy your writing style.

HUFFGHASJFL;AKJSDFL;AJD

Completely kick ** story.

You must update soon or a kitten will implode.

... ha ha to Lovelace. That is all.
Poor Amanda, though...

I was looking forward to this so much and was so glad when it came up. You really have Bartimaeus' wit down to a tee.

No way...No way now way no way nowaynowaynowaynoway...
O:
TWENTY chapters?! WOW! Last time I checked this had like...3? 4? This was really unexpected since BT isn't one of the more populated sites I've been to, and almost all of the stories I've read here so far become forlorn in the end. I kinda lost hope for the fanfics here because of that.
You do not know how happy you've made me by updating regularly. I really do hope you keep it up because this would be one of the better, if not best, fanfictions I've read on the entirety of the site. And that's just based on the first few chapters I've read in the past. Thank you so much for updating and keeping my hopes and love for the utter genious-ness of the Bartimaeus Trilogy alight, even if this IS set in an alternate universe

Well this is sweet. I haven't read a Bartimaeus fic in yonks, let alone a good one. Bart's as awesome as always, which is good. And the Nat/Kitty thing is pretty awesome in itself. Keep on updating.

OMG!! when is the next chapter gonna come out!! i have been waiting foeva TT-TT, well, at least since, well, the last time a chapter came out!! i

This story is amazingly written. Your Bartimaeus perspective is so realistic and it's a really fresh take on the story.
I hope that this is updated soon

Very nice, although I'm inclined to think that Kitty would've been the one to accept the gun from Bartimaeus (who apparently has some kind of deep dark secrety past!).