I loved this! You could have turned it into a full on story just to satisfy my thirst for this amazing story! :)

Aw Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! Sasuke is so adoravle hen he is a coward xD

Ack! Damn!

WIshed you could've continued because it feels slightly...barren...(?)

I mean its like you purposely - and yes in a sense you did - left it off and just went to bed not bothering to finish the unfinished fairytale of the prince getting his princess, while we (Me, Myself and I) are left there wailing our baby guts out.

*pouts indignitaley*

Your so mean :P

I agree with your friend. the first chapter was too cut off and gave the impression of need more.

second chapter at least gave a kind of closure. we know he will pursue, it's just up to us to imagine how it will go about :)

cute story :)

Wonderful

And..wait,what? No third part? Aww, come on, get Sasuke confessed already *pouts*

omg... thats seriously cute to think sasuke trying to confess to hinata... SERIOUSLY CUTE! I wish there were more fanfics like this... ;u;

haha funy opdate soon

The end its kind of sad ;[ .. and its sad that youre ending it that way and with no chance for a threeshot.. but never mind - I like it ;] Keep writing and good luck!

Why won't you continue this? Please? We need to see Sasuke succeed in his confession to Hinata! Oh well, this is more realistic and it leaves hope. Wonderful fic in my opinion,you didn't follow the cliche.

I think this is wonderful! I love Hinata, she's so realistic. It's not like notorious people are all that important after all.

OMG... Cute! I LOLed at the ending..'Well, he’ll just steal another book she wants then.'

LOL!

aboslutely cute!

ok ok ok. you dont have to make this a three shot. MAKE IT A FULL BLOWN STROY! I NEED THIS TO CONTINUE! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY! MAKE IT A FULL STORY! PLZ! ITS SO INTERESTING AND COOL! PLZ CONTINUE!

and what a lovely two shot it was! i absolutely adore sasuhina and this was a great honor in their name!

i laughed when sasuke asked why hinata was afraid of him. who ISNT afraid of uchiha! lol

like this so much!

sasuke stole her book, for getting a chance to confrss, huh. too bad he didnt do it. and too bad u wouldnt continue this, huh? xD LOL

maybe, the next time sasuke steal her book, he'll confess? (am hoping here) LOL