Fascinating, I look forwards to seeing more of your Morgan, would be interesting for you to write a confrontation between him and Dresden from his point of view. How old is Jennifer?
Jay

Nice beginning, I'm looking forward to seeing more!

Heh. Excellent story thus far.

This is certainly a more human side of Warden Morgan than we usually get, but nothing has been done out of character so far. Though I admit to being curious which wizard Miss Tarleton dated earlier... since Harry is the only Wizard worthy of the title in Chicago!

Can't wait to read more.

Nice and interesting. Though you never did explain why Jennifer kept those dancers near the battle.

Normally I don't much like stories with an OFC love interest - I read it out of what was originally mild curiosity, as I wasn't aware Morgan had that many fans, and it piqued my interest - but damn! This is actually really good stuff! It's well-written, entertaining, and the OC is actually interesting, well-developed-seeming, and fun to watch in action as opposed to annoying or cardboard or boring - which I knew on some level wasn't impossible, but haven't really seen pulled off before this.

So, kudos. :D

This is normally where I would try to give an earnest critique - but other than it being way too short, I can't really find much to complain about! Even more kudos. ;) I'm definitely sticking you on my Favs list next time I actually bother to log in!

~Emma