 Ice Queen 11/27/02 . chapter 1 Yeah, Baby! I love this story. It shows that Trent does have a thing for daria just as I suspected. And which I search for little messages like in That was Then, This is Dumb.
When Jane was talking about how Darias gonna' wait for him to emerge as a butterfly. As she said this, Trent opened his eyes and smiled. I literally screamed with joy and got a really weird look from my gramma'. This story satisfied my shipper quota for the day. Yeah right! All I read are shippers with Daria and Trent. Beacause they riock. Oh yeah! |
 catnamedzane 9/17/02 . chapter 1Hey. I just finished Chapter One and I'm gonna review. (As though you couldn't tell, but alas, digress) I thought it was pretty interesting, but one thing you should probably change is the page setup. All of the words are to the far left of the page and it gets kinda annoying after a while. So for whatever reason it turned out the way, you should try to change it. It's probably just some little screw-up with the HTML or something like that. As far as content, etc., goes, it's definitely turning into a TD story, at least it seems that way to me. And don't get me wrong, I think they'd go good together, just maybe don't go so 'Cap'n Obvious' with it. You know what I mean? Probably not, but anyway. But I liked it. It's a good start for wherever you're gonna go with it. Oh, and before, you said that they were up at 4am and then five seconds later, he/you said that it was around 4 and I thought in the morning and I was wondering why Daria was over there @ 4, BUT THEN, I realized PM. So yeah. I'm sure you don't care, and maybe I'm a little slow on the uptake or something, but that's life.
Ciao Mien.
-BRiTT |