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Rapunzelle
2009-05-02 . chapter 5
Loved this. Poor Draco. Please say you are going to update this again
:-)
sasunarugurl
2009-04-07 . chapter 5
that was great update soon
evildictionaryninja
2008-06-05 . chapter 5
I like this story so far. I wonder what Voldemort will do in retaliation for not getting Draco back. Was his body completely fixed when Draco left? or is it still rotting?
Smoocher of Evil
2008-05-30 . chapter 1
It feels like forever since you've updated! Please update again! I really do like this story and want to see what happens.
BJ is Love
2008-03-03 . chapter 4
Dude? Update soon pleaz? It's been 4ever!
unknownn
2008-03-03 . chapter 4
HELL YEAH FOR THE SMEX!
Draco/Harry Shipper
2008-03-03 . chapter 4
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! KEEP UPDATING PLEAZE?
Smoocher of Evil
2008-02-05 . chapter 4
I love this story! I get so excited when you update. It's kind of sad actually (me getting excited not your story). Keep up the good work!
El Takeshiro
2008-02-02 . chapter 4
You should have like ten billion more reviews. xD

This story is so good. I really enjoy reading it. Poor Draco-face.

And it looks like it's going to take a good direction. It would be awesome with or without the smut, I think. xD
Not All Tears Are An Evil
2008-02-02 . chapter 4
i am in LOVE with this story! you're keeping harry and draco in character, as well as ron and hemione. (i love ron and draco's banter!) i love the plot so far, a bit confusing, but only because you've only just begun, and you're still in the process of revealing everything. like, what exactly draco's magic does, or what side effects it might bring up, and what does voldemort want with draco? oh, and i also LOVE the fact that you brought back sirius! and made him and remus a couple!! so i hope this nice long review has you motivated to update! and soon! :)

oh, and to answer your question on the smut- SURE! why not? :)
EngelCre
2007-12-23 . chapter 3
You update! Hooray xD and even though you dislike this chapter I quite like it. In the begining the banter between Harry and Draco was quite amusing and Draco's power I find myself wanting to know more about it. Neige is so cute! I hope he gets to stay and I can't help but wonder if Ron is jealous of Harry and Draco relationship! >_< Hoping you update soon! x3

-Engel
EngelCre
2007-11-17 . chapter 2
Sorry for the very short review xP my brain wasn't functioning well... press the review button at two in the morning…*lol* okay let me try this again longer review this time so on with business!

I really like how this chapter turns out, the reason Harry and Draco are together and why Harry is so protective of Draco is all becoming clear. I felt so bad for Draco in the flashback... *sobs* I can sort of guess that he’s O'Voldie toy to play and throw away whenever he wish.

I also like how you try to describe the wall and floor it's quite detail but here's an advice you should describe the backdrop/background only when is it necessary to the story like it have a purpose in the plot. Otherwise it's just a distraction for us readers and we tend to skip the unnecessary part.

In this chapter you develop more of Harry’s character and that’s very well done. I can understand Harry’s protectiveness now and I love the last part of the chapter how he care so deeply about Draco that he won’t let anything stop him even his death! *squee* That’s so sweet. Oh and Draco’s magic is new, very interesting and cool though! I want to see more this magic and see how it comes to be.

Another wonderful chapter and keep it coming!

-Engel
EngelCre
2007-11-16 . chapter 2
You update! xD
harry j. paws
2007-11-09 . chapter 1
I agree with the other reviewers, your Harry is very well written and seems authentic. Overall a great story, update soon.
rocheleanime
2007-10-26 . chapter 1
I love your story and I hope you can update soon
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