Your one shot is very powerfully written. Good job.

wow that was a really good oneshot, a little bit short, but good.

It was good,I mean really good,bud it had lack of emotions...A bit slow and at times even borring...Sorry,it's true,but it dosn't mean it wasn't good,cause it was.

that was quite good. i think you should continue it to have rose's feelings and interactions with Jack and have her be afraid to open up and he has to get it out of her