 69AnimeFreak69 3/13/12 . chapter 9it really looked like something hard to write but I'm sure you will be ok with the update cuz de nightmare is done |
 The You of Yesterday 10/22/11 . chapter 9This is an interesting idea. I liked your portrayal of Sakumo's suicide - it's a little different to most that I've read, which usually have Kakashi coming in after he's already dead or dying. I was close to tears at that part.
Naruto's reaction to events is spot-on throughout this - he's such a unique person, as he always does exactly what he thinks is right no matter what anyone else thinks of it, and that is admirable.
It's nice that he sees that Kakashi went through something similar to himself as a child. The villagers are very fickle and not at all pleasant really. Who blames a kid for something his father has done, or for having something sealed inside him which saved the village? It's even more amazing to think that after all that, Naruto is still desperate to defend the village and its people. He is the complete opposite of Sasuke - he can forgive so readily.
I wont ask, as I see it has been a while, but I do look forward to your next update. |
 narutofan 6/13/11 . chapter 9 WOW, that was a LONG chapter, personal I think that you mixed cannon with your own story very well :)
Let me just say, this story is simply amazing, you have described the feelings really good and just the way you have wroted this story is just sooooooo good :)
I really hope that you will update this story in the future :D |
 narutofan 6/13/11 . chapter 7 Another great chapter as always :) |
 narutofan 6/13/11 . chapter 6 You write very well, it is almost as being there when I am reading your story :) |
 narutofan 6/13/11 . chapter 5 Great chapter |
 narutofan 6/13/11 . chapter 4 So sad :( |
 narutofan 6/13/11 . chapter 3 This is such a good story :) |
 narutofan 6/13/11 . chapter 2 Kakashi is such a cutie:p |
 narutofan 6/13/11 . chapter 1 AAAAAW, such a cute story, Kakashi is simply adorable :) |
 ALE 12/24/10 . chapter 9 ...this meaned nothing to me sorry is like...NOTHING I DONT KNOW...BORING...sorry for my bad english jeje |
 Cool-as-icecream 11/22/09 . chapter 9I love this story. You are a great fic writer. You're doing a really good job of using the manga but making it your own. |
 Xxxxxxxxxx 11/22/09 . chapter 9 You have to continue this before I go crazy and commit suicide like Sakumo. It's too awesome to be left without update. please don't leeave this one dead! |
 Shadow.SSJ 10/27/09 . chapter 9Very good chapter, as usual. You change/add lot of things, but you did great! It all fit, don't be afraid.
I'm waiting for the next one! See ya! |
 secretdewdrop 10/4/09 . chapter 9great story i hope you decide to finish it! |