Awesome story. It was a pleasure to read

Good ending!! :)

Well done! Great story and well written. I was surprised to learn you were only 16! When I go back and read fanfic I wrote at 16 I cringe, but yours is in no way cringeworthy. :)

Loving it. Can't wait for more. I really wish they did this in the episode. Hurry and update soon.

Loved it, glad you finished it. Very good job with the team dynamics especially the John/Rodney bits.

Keller was good too.

I agree with you, I like how you decided to finish things between Rodney and John. Thank so much for the fic.

Love the team dynamics and concern and the way John asked about everyone when he woke up. Really loved the ending scene between John and Rodney - so true to character.

Great!

Oh I really liked this. I loved this! And how did I miss chapters 2 and 3?

Well done.

That was an excellent end. A nice sublte way of working things out without the boys getting out of character with their emotions. It was very them.

I love how easy just a word or two from Sheppard will calm and reassure Rodney and vice versa. You really have the team characterisations spot on. This was very good, thanks. Ali D :~)
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*Claps* Great ending to an awesome story! Thanks so much for sharing!

Another great chapter, I particularly loved Rodney in this one. His snappy comment to Keller was perfectly in keeping and while she is doing her best I do get the feeling she is out of her depth a lot of the time. Poor John, let's hope he is over the worst of it. Ali D :~)
SHEPPARD: "We can name it later!"

Oh, this is so good and you write the expansion of this episode so well. Kudos! Off now to read the next bit. Ali D :~)
SHEPPARD: "We can name it later!"

Great chapter and excellent finish. Very good characterization. Thanks for sharing.