You have a way with writing. You have me so curious and wanting more. I hope you continue this story.

I loved this! I wish there was more, but I'm sure you're busy. When you get a chance, please update! I do like what you have here so far.

"Her body tingled from the encounter and the adrenaline that had built up had not had a chance to be released. She felt slightly restless as she walked down corridor after corridor. "

Oh? Just 'slightly'? *snicker* Poor horny and still clueless Natsuki. =P Poor horny, still in-love-but-trying-to-hide-it Shizuru. *sigh* Those 2 girls...

What could be worse? To have an unrequited and platonic love for someone, or have a rock-your-world-anywhere-but-we're-too-stubborn-to-acknowledge-our-feelings relationship? Well, either way, it's not fully realized, not enough to really blossom into something passionate and truly loving. But hey, there's time. ;) And this is why we love our ShizNat.

Thanks for another visual and thoughtful story. Urg, I can't wait for more MH Destiny translations!!

All right, excellent! Absolutely love your writing!

You, my friend, have an astounding ability to draw readers--yes, I believe I have the right to generalize at this moment--into your wonderfully created worlds, be they new to fanfiction or veterans of the class... or even, in my somewhat embarrassing case, in an alcohol-induced stupor after a night at the bars... :>

Yes, you did that. Not sure if it's resume notable, however your writing managed to keep my drunk butt awake for an extra 2 1/2 hours after I should have passed out into a semi-blissful state. It may not be the most traditional compliment, but what can I say... if the power of mere words can counteract chemical reactions within the brain and body, then I'd have to say that classifies as great writing. Lol ^_^

Anyway, keep up the good work! Definitely look forward to the progression of your stories.

Wow how the heck I've forgot to review this one haha *shame on me*

Really the storyline, the tension between our hot enemies *drools* just classic XD

Their smut action is too hot.

Today was my boring day, so I've decide to read all of your ShizNat story over again and it was worth it *I'm happy and not so boring anymore haha*

Smut~
D'aww I just saw the Update date for this! How fail of me lol.
Best of luck in real life and I hope you get back to writing sometime :)

Wooh Nao to the rescue! Hilarious stuff really, I couldn't stop giggling :P
Shizuru in command is very nice by the way!

A Mai Hime Destiny I actually want to read :P
This puts the canon to shame!

WHOO! Wow! Scoorrching HAWT! Damn I loved this chapter! 8D

Wonderfully written story, and very intriguing plot >3

I do hope that you continue this story sometime. It's simply amazing =D

Interesting plot. I have read some of the Destiny series, but this plot is better ^.^

this is nice.^^

hope you update!^^

wow thqat is really intense. trully an awsome angsty story so far

i love this... please update soon... i haven't finish reading the manga... i didn't even finish volume one... do you know what happened between shizuru and natsuki there? i don't care about the others... thanks for posting...

amm shizuru's room?

holy crap! sunrise should just make natsuki and shizuru the main character and make them a real item... anyway, i love your first chapter...

You're one of the best here, seriously. Glad that you came up with another wonderful to read chapter. And yeah, I just friggin' enjoy your smut scenes. They're so hot.