aww _ at first i thought sasuke was an arse for telling naruto no but i like the way you make it sound better at the end _

Nice!

Ah this was so cute :D and the title sounds really cute too XD

aww that was so CUTE it made me cry T.T hehe o well i loved it

...I have never seen an idea that is so...what the hell do I call it...? Bizarre? Weird? Insane?

But...I love it. Really, I do. I don't know why, but there is just something so...COMPELLING about a slightly sadistic Sasuke. Okay, maybe a little more than 'slightly' but still, I really loved reading this. It's original and I can't seem to not love something that's well written and creative

aaw...its so sweet...kinda demented at the begining but sweet towards the end

this is really good! very cute

wow! its kinda funny, but cute! i luv it!

...hm. I never really thought of anything like this. Its certainly original. The ending was cute, and you write well. I like it.

silly teme, tricks are for kids. sorry thats what i thought of when you put that. sorta sad story but good i likes the ending

Ah... so sweet! I love a mildly sadistic Sasuke, but to have him still get the tears he wants in the end and have them be even better than the others was perfect.

Your story wasn't lame! It was cute in a sad/happy/hopeful kinda way. I really enjoyed reading it, and I hope you dont smash your head in walls... you'll get stupid!

Haha! j/k about the stupid thing!

I liked it! It was really sweet...

But I'm wondering...who's the person he had to protect? (I have a pretty good idea.)